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Soaked Intensity
Hot flashes and a moon fever dream
I felt him claiming my soul
The solid reality of watching him move in the moon-haze
Lines blur between reality and fantasy
...I fell in love with a ghost...
Mind hazed by my lust crazed self
Deprived for way too long my secrets wept for the release he promised;
the sweet torture elicited by he alone
And so I grasped him tighter, deeper
Racing for the highest peak
Becoming one existence in the slanting light of night
Crying out that final moment
When waking-sleep dissolves into fully awake
And I realize I let go for a ghost;
trusted enough to fall for a reality that never was
Saturated in remembered senses so intense I felt the world stop spinning
...but he was here just a moment ago...
I felt him claiming my soul
The solid reality of watching him move in the moon-haze
Lines blur between reality and fantasy
...I fell in love with a ghost...
Mind hazed by my lust crazed self
Deprived for way too long my secrets wept for the release he promised;
the sweet torture elicited by he alone
And so I grasped him tighter, deeper
Racing for the highest peak
Becoming one existence in the slanting light of night
Crying out that final moment
When waking-sleep dissolves into fully awake
And I realize I let go for a ghost;
trusted enough to fall for a reality that never was
Saturated in remembered senses so intense I felt the world stop spinning
...but he was here just a moment ago...
Published 23rd Apr 2014
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2014 6:26pm
I know of this intensity in ghost form Chels.
I'm sure many will relate to this ink's content.
You've written this wonderfully...
"Mind hazed by my lust crazed self
Deprived for way too long my secrets wept for the release he promised;
the sweet torture elicited by he alone
And so I grasped him tighter, deeper"<--Loved! Xo
I'm sure many will relate to this ink's content.
You've written this wonderfully...
"Mind hazed by my lust crazed self
Deprived for way too long my secrets wept for the release he promised;
the sweet torture elicited by he alone
And so I grasped him tighter, deeper"<--Loved! Xo
24th Apr 2014 2:14am
Thank you for the sweet comment Ms Rain, these words have been haunting me for months....ever since the first ghostin; and im glad you enjoyed that part particularly, it happens to be my favorite part of the whole. :)
11th Jun 2014 11:10pm
BEAUTIFUL Piece Ms. Chels!!!
I can surely relate sweets!!
Awesome read!!
You and Pen take a bow!!!
Sir Lancelott
I can surely relate sweets!!
Awesome read!!
You and Pen take a bow!!!
Sir Lancelott
1st Jul 2014 12:28pm