Hall of Glass

The use of the word "mildly" so effecting here. Haunting and powerful as despite the brevity it surprises often - cool writings

Thank you Whale, I sought to add the slightest details to smoothen out the imagery.

Good entry, sir. And, if you would like the advice, I think it best belongs in the dark category. To change that, you can click the edit button, and there is a link at the bottom of the page that comes up, asking if you want to change the category it's in.

You have a great voice, Tacete--I can totally hear you doing voice-overs, narrations, and such!  Well done!

Quite interesting.

Thank you all.

Your general thoughts brought upon me a realisation, this poem came together so freely. Sub-consciously even. I still find myself arguing internally as to what inspired me. And I suppose you're right; there is vulnerability of all things within the Hall, I say this within the title alone. To answer your question, I shrouded whatever 'darkness' in abstract imagery and a rhetoric question, I feel as if this poem is nothing but a conversation to my reflection. I create too little literal images for either of us to interpret.  And I agree, the solemn shattering image felt a carrier rather than its own undertone, it rears its hideous face.  
 
Thank you, sincerely for your time Braggman. I have improvements to make and perhaps a lawyer to hire. Haha