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Blunt Narration
Hate breeds everything Zen
Count to ten
And all your fingers might fall off
Cough
Until the blood is
Coming from your stomach
Not your throat
Deep throat
Yeah
I suck dick
With a lick
He'll give in
And I'll have him on my chin
I'll suck until we fuck
Backwards
Fucking sucks
Cock
8 inches deep
Inside
I ride until
My moans peek into a scream
And it'll seem
Like I'm happy
For a minute
An hour
A day..
In the life
Of one suffering artist
Addicted to sex
And eloquence,
But never on a substance
No
The words are burnt into her lungs
Like emphysema
Severe
Distress in third person.
3/6/11
Count to ten
And all your fingers might fall off
Cough
Until the blood is
Coming from your stomach
Not your throat
Deep throat
Yeah
I suck dick
With a lick
He'll give in
And I'll have him on my chin
I'll suck until we fuck
Backwards
Fucking sucks
Cock
8 inches deep
Inside
I ride until
My moans peek into a scream
And it'll seem
Like I'm happy
For a minute
An hour
A day..
In the life
Of one suffering artist
Addicted to sex
And eloquence,
But never on a substance
No
The words are burnt into her lungs
Like emphysema
Severe
Distress in third person.
3/6/11
Published 16th Mar 2011
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17th Mar 2011 10:21am
Wow, I really like the frank and simple structure of this poem. It's so direct and punchy. Also enjoy how you subtly combine dark imagery into an erotic context, that works for me.
17th Mar 2011 8:19pm
19th Mar 2011 8:03pm
I like this very much. It is pleasing and so sad at the same time.Can almost feel an emptiness inside after I read it. Very good.
20th Mar 2011 4:30am
30th May 2011 9:02pm
This is one grand piece of works you have sweets. The strong structure of such a short piece is outstanding. keep it up sweets!!!
