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iku'bhuong rillora ha
splendiforously,ofXtremFckulence,
eye
canno rem ember thee/mypass
word
pending
pendering pandering
unto
completion of a better narcissus
of a better bloom
of a better gold
standard /
o'hole'o mySoul!
rock [me]
on hutsut d'rill'o'rock, - &so&so&soforth -
cryyyyyyyyyyyying
out laud
for better nonsense for there's ain't no sense in
that what said I said
f'or
sexing fo'r suckin thee juice runnin down y'leg, baby,
juice,juice dribbledown my luckyleg whose
lips suck you that sucketh me, & wee,[wee,oui madame],
/on
the mercy of y'our spritely
delicate
savor
wafting thru me'my hard won
oldtyme loser's dream,
bringing along the
eros
of a dozen like-mind sisters' lick
as only a tongue
can tell
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PHOTO: "PhucklingGenius" by dkzk2013sept
eye
canno rem ember thee/mypass
word
pending
pendering pandering
unto
completion of a better narcissus
of a better bloom
of a better gold
standard /
o'hole'o mySoul!
rock [me]
on hutsut d'rill'o'rock, - &so&so&soforth -
cryyyyyyyyyyyying
out laud
for better nonsense for there's ain't no sense in
that what said I said
f'or
sexing fo'r suckin thee juice runnin down y'leg, baby,
juice,juice dribbledown my luckyleg whose
lips suck you that sucketh me, & wee,[wee,oui madame],
/on
the mercy of y'our spritely
delicate
savor
wafting thru me'my hard won
oldtyme loser's dream,
bringing along the
eros
of a dozen like-mind sisters' lick
as only a tongue
can tell
______________________________________________________________
[u]dkzk-love4saledribblinUpwardtheeDowngrade2014apr19jjjjjjjjjjjjj[/u
PHOTO: "PhucklingGenius" by dkzk2013sept
Published 19th Apr 2014
| Edited 23rd Apr 2014
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19th Apr 2014 9:33pm
20th Apr 2014 2:23am
thank you....you nailed it, pal.....
I have an abiding affection for cacaphonia.
i'preciate your dropping in
oh, I don't, know, the phonics
seemed quite free of cac to me...
but I agree with the rest of the above...
seemed quite free of cac to me...
but I agree with the rest of the above...
20th Apr 2014 2:26am
20th Apr 2014 7:13am
Futurist/Dada take on eroticism. Good concept, I enjoyed the aesthetics thoroughly, but I think the actual text stands to be developed further.
thankyou new-comer.....
development be as it may...we'll see what developes, but for what's-left-of-me, development can no longer contrived, constructed, nor 'striven' toward. Spontaneous creation leading toward leaving 'the product 'be', as if it were 'found art' to be momentarily embraced, then let go, set free....
yes, I'm very influenced by both dada & zen-mind predecessors, but with that must come abandonment of 'theory', 'doctrine', & finding a manner of embracing our contradictions without falling into the trap of our illusion/delusions of dualist/polarized reality, which chokes the shit out of 'developement' of any ability to move beyond our precious idiot-pride/shame ego wallerin'& conditioning...
but I may be Wrong, right? Waddu 'I know', yknow?
peace&blessings, kid...
feel free to comment on all the other 1300+ road apples I've dropped here in DUPland. Ha.
and
I promise to check in on your stuff