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erotic restraint; inspired by ancient Japanese court tradition
koi tracing below -
silky sleaves sway allure
cherry blossoms rain
pale skin, pouty plea
kimono sleek loosening
dragon fire displays
lowering eyes, meek
pursue heated gesturing
year of the horse romp
shadows dance on glade
whispers tangle passion's flame
pressing flesh against
enlaced capturing
slip below the crescent smile
wild young melody
stars witnessing frolicking
bloom, my darling - surrender[/font]
silky sleaves sway allure
cherry blossoms rain
pale skin, pouty plea
kimono sleek loosening
dragon fire displays
lowering eyes, meek
pursue heated gesturing
year of the horse romp
shadows dance on glade
whispers tangle passion's flame
pressing flesh against
enlaced capturing
slip below the crescent smile
wild young melody
stars witnessing frolicking
bloom, my darling - surrender[/font]
Published 9th Apr 2014
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9th Apr 2014 3:31am
so I will have to investigate the Japanese traditions, they are veiled in Oriental mystery.
your poem is the most delightful journey into the rare offices of love, Angel...
your poem is the most delightful journey into the rare offices of love, Angel...
It's a series of Haikus, ending w/ a Tanka. You can read about it on the thread extreme content at the group... LJ challenged the men to a haiku dance. I was inspired by her info. on this lovely form of courting. Thank you, so much for reading John.
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9th Apr 2014 3:43am
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9th Apr 2014 3:45am
9th Apr 2014 3:47am
Who among us wouldn't surrender to the erotic powers you possess!? This was outstanding my dear! :)
9th Apr 2014 3:49am
9th Apr 2014 3:05pm
what an euphoric journey, most pleasing scene. This foreign realm laced with your sensual words has played a mystical enchanting dance within my head.
9th Apr 2014 6:43pm
