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Carrots haven't tasted
the same, since
that time you came over
and we ate through most
of that large bag together
in my room, talking
about everything and then nothing
all at once.
the same, since
that time you came over
and we ate through most
of that large bag together
in my room, talking
about everything and then nothing
all at once.
Published 9th Apr 2014
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9th Apr 2014 4:38am
this is the kind of poem that could be positive or negative, so it lets readers work over it, get the juice out of it.
don't give up on healthy snacks...
don't give up on healthy snacks...
