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The Path
How can everything be planned?
How can everything have a purpose
a moment,
a time,
a reason?
How can one thing lead to another
and bring me to the beginning
a beginning with no end?
How can everything have a purpose
a moment,
a time,
a reason?
How can one thing lead to another
and bring me to the beginning
a beginning with no end?
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8th Apr 2014 11:08pm
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8th Apr 2014 11:56pm
The Great Wheel Turns....and though all seems to be following a plan of pre-destined patterns, why is it then, that we seem to be moving throughout our lives, in continuous circles?
Your piece certainly depicts that mysterious aspect of our existence, my Friend.
Your piece certainly depicts that mysterious aspect of our existence, my Friend.
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9th Apr 2014 1:36am
I'm here with you at this moment,all part of the plan lol...peace and more to you my friend :)
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9th Apr 2014 2:59am
Deep n profound questions hope you get the answers, cuz I'd like to know them myself bro! :)
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2014 4:23pm
a pondering path... Enjoyed!
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11th Apr 2014 8:29pm
I know not the answer.. but your poem reminded me of the following quote..
"We all possess the thunder of pure fury and the calm breeze of tranquility. If it wasn't for tomorrow, how much would we get done today? Whatever your purpose... embrace it completely." ~Paul Vitale
Excellent thought provoking ink!! with respect..domore
"We all possess the thunder of pure fury and the calm breeze of tranquility. If it wasn't for tomorrow, how much would we get done today? Whatever your purpose... embrace it completely." ~Paul Vitale
Excellent thought provoking ink!! with respect..domore
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19th May 2014 11:47pm
Predestination? It's a question that has baffled men for ages. Thought provoking write. I will think on it.
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20th May 2014 1:15am