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Dream Visitor
Baptize me in your saccharine nectar
Redeem me from this burning fantasy
That hell’s furious flame can not rival
Bestow your forbidden love upon me
Come like a thief in the night
You can leave me desolate in the morn
Fill my dreams with an illusive reality
Where my wanton fantasy was born
Let me cup my hands on soft flesh
And gyrate my tongue on your tenderness
I give my every breath to your pleasure
And inhale my own bewitched happiness
Rest your sweet lips on mine
And lift away as the sun rises
Dissipating like smoke into neon clouds
Redeem me from this burning fantasy
That hell’s furious flame can not rival
Bestow your forbidden love upon me
Come like a thief in the night
You can leave me desolate in the morn
Fill my dreams with an illusive reality
Where my wanton fantasy was born
Let me cup my hands on soft flesh
And gyrate my tongue on your tenderness
I give my every breath to your pleasure
And inhale my own bewitched happiness
Rest your sweet lips on mine
And lift away as the sun rises
Dissipating like smoke into neon clouds
Published 6th Apr 2014
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6th Apr 2014 10:21pm
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6th Apr 2014 10:37pm
Anonymous
6th Apr 2014 10:23pm
You are the poster child for, 'age ain't nothing but a number'. Your mind is beyond years. :)
Mental maturity is a beautiful thang'...
"Baptize me in your saccharine nectar"<--lovely line. This is one sexy write. Xo
Mental maturity is a beautiful thang'...
"Baptize me in your saccharine nectar"<--lovely line. This is one sexy write. Xo
6th Apr 2014 10:39pm
I still have plenty of growing to do, but thank you so much for that... Thats an amazing compliment to me :)
I'm happy you enjoyed my piece.. :)
I'm happy you enjoyed my piece.. :)
7th Apr 2014 2:17pm
This was smooth and hot. It sets the tone nicely that captures a dreamy erotic.
8th Apr 2014 9:09pm