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Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
Huge pain in my heart
Six years of intensive fight
Now hope disappears
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Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 10:07am
re: Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 10:19am
Yes I am OK, except a very hard disappointment! But anyways, I'll survive to this one. Just for public engagement! Thank you for asking and for your comment!
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31st Mar 2014 1:43pm
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re: Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 2:19pm
I am speechless! What a wonderful gift for me, really!
Thank you so much, friends of my heart, awesome poets, Vee and Case!
Thank you so much, friends of my heart, awesome poets, Vee and Case!
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31st Mar 2014 5:24pm
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31st Mar 2014 10:10pm
Not so great, just 1m65!!! (lol)
Thank you so much, Case and Vee, you are very nice, just at this time, when I need to be helped!!!
Thank you so much, Case and Vee, you are very nice, just at this time, when I need to be helped!!!
Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 2:10pm
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