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Three 'Lane Highway' (3 brother collab)
*this is a piece I wrote with my two younger bros.(real life)
awhile back
Poetikmind:
Aaaaahh, I'm
Cruisin', weavin'—
damn cops can't stop me speedin'
I'm checkin' tha wreckin' tryin'
to be gettin' in my way,
as I'm just rollin' down tha highway
aprroachin' tha next exit
Yo, I check tha kid in tha escalade...
he made a mistake
had to slam on tha brake;
this shit is another one to contemplate
on tha things that we can all relate
to life's maddenin' highway
wanna die? or live long?
my way is to go on
for so long as I'm able,
though the income's not as stable
as I'd like it to be, this life of strife
is full of pure madness don't you see?...
WiseWithWordz:
the road up ahead of me
caution signs, insightful-gee
Gee, it only took two of me
to reproduce this mini-me
on that lonely highway drifting by
I pause-only a minute
reach with my eyes-
towards the sky seeking forgiveness
as I speed by
I believe po-po caught my lie...
AsIThink:
Traveling is tiring;
traversing this tract...
Focused on life's drama,
My mind bounces back...
And forthright driving at night
I can hardly grasp my plight;
Road blackened with spotted light-
Behind me, I can't see
The four-wheeled steeds
Constantly flanking me...
Is that a whistle and a shrill?
Or is it just The 5 acting ill?
awhile back
Poetikmind:
Aaaaahh, I'm
Cruisin', weavin'—
damn cops can't stop me speedin'
I'm checkin' tha wreckin' tryin'
to be gettin' in my way,
as I'm just rollin' down tha highway
aprroachin' tha next exit
Yo, I check tha kid in tha escalade...
he made a mistake
had to slam on tha brake;
this shit is another one to contemplate
on tha things that we can all relate
to life's maddenin' highway
wanna die? or live long?
my way is to go on
for so long as I'm able,
though the income's not as stable
as I'd like it to be, this life of strife
is full of pure madness don't you see?...
WiseWithWordz:
the road up ahead of me
caution signs, insightful-gee
Gee, it only took two of me
to reproduce this mini-me
on that lonely highway drifting by
I pause-only a minute
reach with my eyes-
towards the sky seeking forgiveness
as I speed by
I believe po-po caught my lie...
AsIThink:
Traveling is tiring;
traversing this tract...
Focused on life's drama,
My mind bounces back...
And forthright driving at night
I can hardly grasp my plight;
Road blackened with spotted light-
Behind me, I can't see
The four-wheeled steeds
Constantly flanking me...
Is that a whistle and a shrill?
Or is it just The 5 acting ill?
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