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You'll Get
You don’t want more
from me,
than what I can give,
My heart’s not here.
So you’ll get
Nothing emotional,
or lasting longer,
Than the time it takes to
Kiss, squeeze
Hug and Tug clothes
Tease, Taste
Stroke, Suck, then Fuck
I’ll get mine,
So will you.
I’ve gotta go
Time’s up
from me,
than what I can give,
My heart’s not here.
So you’ll get
Nothing emotional,
or lasting longer,
Than the time it takes to
Kiss, squeeze
Hug and Tug clothes
Tease, Taste
Stroke, Suck, then Fuck
I’ll get mine,
So will you.
I’ve gotta go
Time’s up
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- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
27th Mar 2014 9:20pm
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re: Re: You'll Get
27th Mar 2014 9:29pm
Poet..I stepped out of my comfort zone for this one.. :) was trying something a little different :) Thank you soo much for always encouraging words.. with my deepest respect xoxo domore
Re: You'll Get
27th Mar 2014 9:54pm
re: Re: You'll Get
27th Mar 2014 10:50pm
Thank you Sir :) I appreciate the read and comment :) with respect.. domore
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- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
27th Mar 2014 10:03pm
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re: Re: You'll Get
27th Mar 2014 10:52pm
Crim, my friend, I am ever honored with your thoughts. So glad you liked this :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
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- Edited 14th May 2018 9:51pm
27th Mar 2014 11:32pm
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re: Re: You'll Get
28th Mar 2014 5:06am
Thank you Donovan :) for the read and the compliments within your comment...I am honored.
with respect ..domore
ps I believe you indeed, interpreted correctly :)
with respect ..domore
ps I believe you indeed, interpreted correctly :)
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
28th Mar 2014 00:29am
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re: Re: You'll Get
28th Mar 2014 5:08am
Thank you Lovely Flower, you make me smile with your comment...lol with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: You'll Get
4th Apr 2014 1:45am
that was very professionally done. gotta stay on schedule.
seriously good writing...
seriously good writing...
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4th Apr 2014 3:07pm