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'Wrought Indemnification'
A lifetime stained
insufferably contained in there
Sometimes...
It falls like rain
Yet no one cares
Who amongst them
Would even dare
Look into face...
The devastation
Of emotion's sadistic glare
Stories, how to end this
so horrendous...
It's just not fair
How could it be
Possible to find light in here?
Encapsulated...
Transparent, and layed bare
Hidden deep within
Tremendous, indelible pain
Escaping, futilities' jagged corners...
Stark, starless eyes discovered
In a single tear...
insufferably contained in there
Sometimes...
It falls like rain
Yet no one cares
Who amongst them
Would even dare
Look into face...
The devastation
Of emotion's sadistic glare
Stories, how to end this
so horrendous...
It's just not fair
How could it be
Possible to find light in here?
Encapsulated...
Transparent, and layed bare
Hidden deep within
Tremendous, indelible pain
Escaping, futilities' jagged corners...
Stark, starless eyes discovered
In a single tear...
Published 27th Mar 2014
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27th Mar 2014 12:49pm
It's a powerful price to pay. Love these strong stark emotions penned out to excellence, Poe :)
27th Mar 2014 12:53pm
It is indeed sweet angel! Thank you, my heart
is moved by your ever present support :)
is moved by your ever present support :)
27th Mar 2014 1:27pm
Yew ma addiction man ...
Simply love all your pieces...
*Lee_ your dear friend*
Simply love all your pieces...
*Lee_ your dear friend*
27th Mar 2014 1:37pm
Aaaawww talk bout melting a heart! Wow... I feel like a pat of butter! lol
Thank u my sweet poetic one :)
Thank u my sweet poetic one :)
Anonymous
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27th Mar 2014 1:37pm
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27th Mar 2014 1:45pm
Just trying to be worthy of your smiles mi amour! :)
Thank you so much, always appreciate you sweetheart :)
Thank you so much, always appreciate you sweetheart :)
Anonymous
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27th Mar 2014 1:39pm
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27th Mar 2014 1:46pm
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27th Mar 2014 1:58pm
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27th Mar 2014 7:11pm
Aaawww well thank you my dear flower! Truly honored by your words n your support always :)
27th Mar 2014 4:01pm
Truly captivating emotional write...I particularly like these lines:
Transparent, and layed bare
Hidden deep within
Tremendous, indelible pain
/EngrVV
Transparent, and layed bare
Hidden deep within
Tremendous, indelible pain
/EngrVV
27th Mar 2014 7:14pm
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27th Mar 2014 4:23pm
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27th Mar 2014 7:19pm
Hey- it Takes one to know one lady! Thank u so much
for always being there for me :)
for always being there for me :)
Anonymous
27th Mar 2014 5:21pm
Oh this was a powerful dark beauty.
'Wrought Indemnification'<--you have some of the best titles on DU, complimenting your ink nicely...Xo
'Wrought Indemnification'<--you have some of the best titles on DU, complimenting your ink nicely...Xo
27th Mar 2014 7:22pm
Aaaawwwww my dear Rain you lovely sweet woman!
Giving me big smiles with ur wonderful review...I truly thank n appreciate you always :)
Giving me big smiles with ur wonderful review...I truly thank n appreciate you always :)
27th Mar 2014 7:26pm
I agree with RAIN on this piece!!
Your titles do fit these pieces perfectly!
Awesome ink Bro. POE!!
Great read!!
Sir Lancelott
Your titles do fit these pieces perfectly!
Awesome ink Bro. POE!!
Great read!!
Sir Lancelott
27th Mar 2014 7:33pm
Thank you kindly bro! I always love to play words n concepts so I try to make my titles as interesting as I HOPE the pieces are... :) truly, I appreciate u bro. :)
27th Mar 2014 9:16pm
Oh, your pieces ARE interesting and captivating, Poe ... They reach my heart and soul. This one's one of those which get straight to the heart.
28th Mar 2014 2:47am
As does urs to mine n including ur comments
Which mean the world to me... :) thank you my dear,
Appreciate u much :)
Which mean the world to me... :) thank you my dear,
Appreciate u much :)
28th Mar 2014 10:06pm
Drawing/drawn to the jagged corners - we are complicit
Great write Poe
Terse and taut/taught
Great write Poe
Terse and taut/taught
28th Mar 2014 10:15pm
Why you humble me sir, n I profusely thank you
much for your wonderful comment n visit to my page once more... Truly appreciate that n you dude :)
much for your wonderful comment n visit to my page once more... Truly appreciate that n you dude :)