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Eradicated thoughts
So many names,
So many faces.
Too many dreams,
So many places.
Life is moving fast,
And I'm afraid
I'm not fast enough.
Under the garments of doubts,
This truth will be revealed.
Everything I know,
Will hang in the balance,
Teetering on success and failure.
Or will the wind carry my chances away?
Will I go down as just another statistic?
The structure of my idealistic firmament,
Will faulter to black skies
Of a tormented, tangled mind.
Explosions won't even lead me to see.
I grow weary of these games,
To evaporate to nothing,
Would be bliss eternal.
So many faces.
Too many dreams,
So many places.
Life is moving fast,
And I'm afraid
I'm not fast enough.
Under the garments of doubts,
This truth will be revealed.
Everything I know,
Will hang in the balance,
Teetering on success and failure.
Or will the wind carry my chances away?
Will I go down as just another statistic?
The structure of my idealistic firmament,
Will faulter to black skies
Of a tormented, tangled mind.
Explosions won't even lead me to see.
I grow weary of these games,
To evaporate to nothing,
Would be bliss eternal.
Published 25th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2014 5:23pm
...eradicated thoughts can eat at our souls, if we allow it. Beautiful display of thoughts framed, Bale. Xo
25th Mar 2014 5:35pm
25th Mar 2014 5:47pm
Rain- I cannot thank you enough for your kind words! They encourage me to keep going, especially from someone as talented as you.
Grace-I thank you as well for your insight. Your comments are always welcomed and appreciated for the past year, I appreciate the feedback from yet another talented poet.
Grace-I thank you as well for your insight. Your comments are always welcomed and appreciated for the past year, I appreciate the feedback from yet another talented poet.
