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MAKE LOVE NOT WAR
Riding with hippie friends on a “Love Bug”
Smoking pot and drinking beer
While having sex in the back seat
Cock lost in deep throat
Destination: Woodstock
Would you like to rewind and hitch a ride?
Days of non-stop music and partying
Maryjane, LSD, booze and naked women
Hypnotic trance, hallucinations and sex
Can’t stop the music, can’t stop the rain
Sex orgies can’t stop the pain
Only a shot of needle can
Psychedelic experience at its peak
For those whose minds are not weak
Those were the days when we chanted
"Make love not war"
Shrieking, as if we were enchanted.
Smoking pot and drinking beer
While having sex in the back seat
Cock lost in deep throat
Destination: Woodstock
Would you like to rewind and hitch a ride?
Days of non-stop music and partying
Maryjane, LSD, booze and naked women
Hypnotic trance, hallucinations and sex
Can’t stop the music, can’t stop the rain
Sex orgies can’t stop the pain
Only a shot of needle can
Psychedelic experience at its peak
For those whose minds are not weak
Those were the days when we chanted
"Make love not war"
Shrieking, as if we were enchanted.
Published 25th Mar 2014
| Edited 28th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2014 5:19pm
"Cock lost in deep throat
Destination: Woodstock
Would you like to rewind and hitch a ride?"
^^^^when hitchhiking was Safe! :)
I love the image you painted of the 70's Vic, at least that's what came to mind for me. Xo
Destination: Woodstock
Would you like to rewind and hitch a ride?"
^^^^when hitchhiking was Safe! :)
I love the image you painted of the 70's Vic, at least that's what came to mind for me. Xo
26th Mar 2014 1:21pm
You got that right Rain and instead of "unwind" I used "rewind" to tell the readers that I'm talking to the present generation and see what it felt like back in the days.
Thank you Rain.
/EngrVV
Thank you Rain.
/EngrVV
25th Mar 2014 5:34pm
That's still a good slogan, better than 'kilroy was here'. Enjoyed the read, EngrVV.
26th Mar 2014 1:24pm
Thank you Grace...I believe this slogan is timeless and must be observed/followed.
/EngrVV
/EngrVV
25th Mar 2014 8:59pm
26th Mar 2014 1:26pm
I hope I did justice to it...peace brother Solomon!
Thanks for dropping by.
/EngrVV
Thanks for dropping by.
/EngrVV
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 1:36pm
27th Mar 2014 8:49pm
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28th Mar 2014 3:28pm
4th Apr 2014 10:13pm
Perfect time capsule for a period of history. I think you have some unintentional cultural references that can so easily be linked to the music as well.
5th Apr 2014 2:53pm
You read through my mind brother...this was done in a haste to meet the comp. deadline. This piece is subject to further revisions farther down the road.
Thank you and belated happy birthday Ted.
/Vic
Thank you and belated happy birthday Ted.
/Vic