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Ode to Spring-
lustrous path
beckons deep
weightlessly adrift
tender pedals new
to Spring's lifting breath
sway fair willow
embrace long
moisten ripples strewn
sing remembrance
oh, gentle breeze
your fingers entwine
to quite radiant stirs
linger soft your
whispers
awaken fragrance
on Spring pastels abloom
beckons deep
weightlessly adrift
tender pedals new
to Spring's lifting breath
sway fair willow
embrace long
moisten ripples strewn
sing remembrance
oh, gentle breeze
your fingers entwine
to quite radiant stirs
linger soft your
whispers
awaken fragrance
on Spring pastels abloom
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21st Mar 2014 8:59pm
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21st Mar 2014 10:15pm
very sweet poem for the freshening season, Angel. watching for the blooming of trees & the return of birdsong...
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22nd Mar 2014 00:13am
I love the changing of seasons, they each hold a special place in me. Thank you, for reading :)
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23rd Mar 2014 1:16pm
Ooh this touches my so so deeply tht i can feel you deep Like the spring tht permeates a new season. Beautiful write My Blue Angel
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23rd Mar 2014 11:42pm
Thank you, I'm feeling the seasons awakening.. I welcome it with open arms. :)
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