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Your Cup of My'maginary Drinking
sipping absinthe of
thy delicate flesh lotus,
dreams life is not done
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dirtyFootogrffy by: dkzkO'rigiales///
thy delicate flesh lotus,
dreams life is not done
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dkzk2014\\thisisnotHaikupooms,Inc\\\\\
dirtyFootogrffy by: dkzkO'rigiales///
Published 21st Mar 2014
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21st Mar 2014 5:10pm
21st Mar 2014 6:18pm
21st Mar 2014 5:51pm
21st Mar 2014 6:23pm
okay, Jak.....ye stump'd me on this, but
thanks for speakin'up
PS: related to glossolalia, maybe?
22nd Mar 2014 1:00am
the dream which drinks itself
wakes to dreams inwhich it dreams itself
back to dreams inwhich it drinks itself
wakes to dreams inwhich it dreams itself
back to dreams inwhich it drinks itself
22nd Mar 2014 2:05am
there ye have it -
"is it a dream, or is it Memorex?"
peaceUp, VanDal
22nd Mar 2014 7:55am
22nd Mar 2014 12:18pm
I don'rite 'haiku'......
I'm not qualified........but
in MyDUP voluminous archive of bound-for-oblivion 1300+ masterpeaces....is are a few bursts of imitation haakooh, 'published' 20-30 attatime....
blessed be!! such a deeeeep well in th' DeepUnder!
22nd Mar 2014 1:05pm
22nd Mar 2014 1:32pm
23rd Mar 2014 4:01am
Oh but really, did you write so many non-haikus so quickly? It is very difficult form! I have not been able to 'plough' through all your poems here, so many so slow the speed of light!
5-7-5, the syllabication runs through your mind like a non-haiku factory ...
:)
5-7-5, the syllabication runs through your mind like a non-haiku factory ...
:)
23rd Mar 2014 12:06pm
just
disconsciously
streaming
'my'
misconsciousness into
a
5x7x5 size bucket .... & voila! there ye have it!
a shitload of not hai'ku