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The Dingy Bitch
Fighting with myself again
this time it's over a shower
part me thinks I stink
the other half doesn't care,
I turn the water on
then I turn it off
and I just stand there
waiting for some sort of epiphany
10 minutes pass
and nothing comes to mind nor heart
this emptiness becomes a trance
fuck it, I'll just go back to bed.
this time it's over a shower
part me thinks I stink
the other half doesn't care,
I turn the water on
then I turn it off
and I just stand there
waiting for some sort of epiphany
10 minutes pass
and nothing comes to mind nor heart
this emptiness becomes a trance
fuck it, I'll just go back to bed.
Published 13th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
13th Mar 2014 1:57pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
13th Mar 2014 3:02pm
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13th Mar 2014 3:10pm
13th Mar 2014 8:40pm
Hummn! methinks yer oughta
Try a little soap an' water
Just minutes, not an hour
And come out smelling like a flower!
Seriously though this is a good write on what the effects of things like depression are on the souls that suffer from these horrible things.
Love to you.
Try a little soap an' water
Just minutes, not an hour
And come out smelling like a flower!
Seriously though this is a good write on what the effects of things like depression are on the souls that suffer from these horrible things.
Love to you.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
16th Mar 2014 9:38pm
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24th Mar 2014 1:08am
Just standing there alone doesn't make the day (and cleanliness) happen?
Damn, that sucks. I usually sit there for 10 minutes every morning with the same result. Just standing was my plan for tomorrow.
Awesome write, Nikki! I like the way you wrap up the rich inside the simple.
Damn, that sucks. I usually sit there for 10 minutes every morning with the same result. Just standing was my plan for tomorrow.
Awesome write, Nikki! I like the way you wrap up the rich inside the simple.
