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She tempts me with a treat
I haven’t tasted in such a long time
it used to be my favorite meat
so warm so tender so sublime
remembering its sweet savor
my lips form a salacious grin
oh the spicy earthy flavor
the way the juice rolled down my chin
do I or do I not indulge?
I dare not decide in haste
resist i will not, she knows by my bulge
yes please I reply, I’ll have a taste
I haven’t tasted in such a long time
it used to be my favorite meat
so warm so tender so sublime
remembering its sweet savor
my lips form a salacious grin
oh the spicy earthy flavor
the way the juice rolled down my chin
do I or do I not indulge?
I dare not decide in haste
resist i will not, she knows by my bulge
yes please I reply, I’ll have a taste
Published 8th Mar 2014
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8th Mar 2014 11:33pm
I like it, love that he thinks he actually has a choice of whether to indulge or not!!!!
9th Mar 2014 00:06am
You gotta always make one feel like they have a choice even if it is a forgone conclusion :) Thank you for reading me Moon!
8th Mar 2014 11:54pm
9th Mar 2014 00:04am
Thank you so much Tommie! There were some obvious sensual seeds to this write ;)
9th Mar 2014 1:10am
9th Mar 2014 2:16am
I had to at least feign restraint, right? Thank you for reading and commenting Mystree :)
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9th Mar 2014 1:18am
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9th Mar 2014 2:19am
Keep away from the keyboard with that drool LOL I am glad you think it tasty :)
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
9th Mar 2014 3:42am
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Very warm, erotic and sensuous flavor to this poem.... :)
Inviting read indeed... ;)
Inviting read indeed... ;)
9th Mar 2014 3:54am
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9th Mar 2014 6:31am
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9th Mar 2014 8:36am
As always Tim, I am honored that you read my stuff. Thank you so much for the words of encouragement.
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9th Mar 2014 7:15am
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9th Mar 2014 8:38am
Yes indeed, Rose :) I hadn't written a rhymer in a awhile I had fun writing this one :) Thank you for your kind words!
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24th Mar 2014 9:39pm
Thank you so much, Missy! I like the senses to be stimulated while reading and I am glad to have been able to somewhat do so