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What Luck?
Lucky the rabbit
was a 'charmed one' for sure
many times he had hopped
in n' out of danger's door
like a clover, adorned with luck galore
he made all the female rabbits,
hoppin' mad with 'amour'
but one fateful day
his luck hopped out,
compliments of the cat...next door!
was a 'charmed one' for sure
many times he had hopped
in n' out of danger's door
like a clover, adorned with luck galore
he made all the female rabbits,
hoppin' mad with 'amour'
but one fateful day
his luck hopped out,
compliments of the cat...next door!
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8th Mar 2014 8:01pm
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re: Re: What Luck?
8th Mar 2014 10:04pm
Well I was hoping it'd made people laugh
Guess I gotta work on my delivery lol
Thank Crim, u rock!
Guess I gotta work on my delivery lol
Thank Crim, u rock!
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2014 8:17pm
...Not lucky at all...
Cool ink, Poe! :) Me likes....Xo
Cool ink, Poe! :) Me likes....Xo
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8th Mar 2014 11:00pm
Nope he wasn't very lucky at all huh? lol
But I led a 'charmed' life lol thank you my dear I appreciate all your support :)
But I led a 'charmed' life lol thank you my dear I appreciate all your support :)
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8th Mar 2014 8:52pm
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8th Mar 2014 11:02pm
Yup poor rabbit lol Thank you sweetie
Especially for the kiss mmmmmm yummy! lol
Especially for the kiss mmmmmm yummy! lol
Re: What Luck?
8th Mar 2014 9:14pm
Poetik... Hath done it again
What better, than a great read before I lay m head upon pillows
*lovely piece*
What better, than a great read before I lay m head upon pillows
*lovely piece*
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8th Mar 2014 11:03pm
Aaaawww why thank you for that sterling
n uplifting comment! :) truly grateful to u always my sweetness :)
n uplifting comment! :) truly grateful to u always my sweetness :)
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8th Mar 2014 10:38pm
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8th Mar 2014 11:03pm
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
9th Mar 2014 1:21am
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re: Re: What Luck?
9th Mar 2014 12:16pm
You're welcome n I thank you as well for the sweet comment n warm support always! :)
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9th Mar 2014 2:25am
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9th Mar 2014 12:17pm
Thanks bro! I'm glad it made you smile dude
It's my greatest joy when folks get a good laugh out of my silliness lol...appreciate you much :)
It's my greatest joy when folks get a good laugh out of my silliness lol...appreciate you much :)
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9th Mar 2014 10:01am
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9th Mar 2014 12:19pm
Aaaaawwwww my doll, sweet Mia I thank you!
Truly n always a pleasure having your support :)
Truly n always a pleasure having your support :)
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9th Mar 2014 11:53pm
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re: Re: What Luck?
10th Mar 2014 3:02am
Aaawww yea Lol poor lil wabbit bit Da dust!
Lol thank your sweetheart, happy you liked n appreciate your visit n support :)
Lol thank your sweetheart, happy you liked n appreciate your visit n support :)
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10th Mar 2014 5:58pm
Nice to see your concern for the lil rabbit!
Lol jk...thank you sweetie! :)
Lol jk...thank you sweetie! :)
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10th Mar 2014 3:58pm
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10th Mar 2014 6:12pm
Lol you're welcome bro. N thanks alot kid
I'm happy you got a laugh from it... :)
I'm happy you got a laugh from it... :)
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14th Mar 2014 4:42pm
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14th Mar 2014 6:22pm
Interesting question but I simply was going for the laughs! lol
Thank you my thought filled sweetie, appreciate you much always! :)
Thank you my thought filled sweetie, appreciate you much always! :)