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syncretism in blue
ingest me
take within you this essence
which is merely a poor
& unworthy me
where you travel i travel
what you dream i dream
my ardor will brace your mornings
as the stars hold up the heavens
imagine an amalgam
of passionate meditations
(yours & mine)
to make one poem
of twisted tendrils
sumerian skies
a moonscape of lovesongs
wolf skin boots, howling
agony’s ode, dark daughter
a soldier of secrets
heart bursting untamed
a ceremonial offering; blue angel
place me gently
in vague apprehensive chambers
a heart, without breaking
carry me blue
for now
for ever
(designed with the grace of blue_angel)
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Re: syncretism in blue
8th Mar 2014 8:55am
Re: syncretism in blue
8th Mar 2014 12:51pm
When I read what I have written, I see thoughts jotted down.
When I read what You have written, I Feel a True Poet.
When I read what You have written, I Feel a True Poet.
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Re: syncretism in blue
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8th Mar 2014 2:55pm
Surging Verses afloat- eloquently reflecting, the weave, pausing to swirls then set further adrift against the awe of these silken waters of poetic emotions. I'm purged in elation, John. Worthy beyond measure. *Kneeling in honor. Thank you*
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8th Mar 2014 9:41pm
Soft words, powerful feeling of emotion all very eloquently poured into verse. Wonderful loved it hun, xx
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2014 7:04pm
ahhh....I felt the connection in your collabs, and what a beautiful energy to witness. The depth of admiration penned in this inked can't be measured. Simply lovely!
Poetic Respect~
Poetic Respect~
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