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invocation...
I guess I see us as
two children playing in a garden...
may wizards protect us
from all that will harden...
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Re: invocation...
7th Mar 2014 3:29am
I fell you are going for a deeper meaning, but I'm having trouble figuring out what that is.
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re: Re: invocation...
7th Mar 2014 3:38am
Looking at a time when
life felt magical and before
life required the building
of a protective wall...thank
you for reading and commenting
so thoughtfully..:)
life felt magical and before
life required the building
of a protective wall...thank
you for reading and commenting
so thoughtfully..:)
Re: invocation...
7th Mar 2014 3:52am
Beautifully written, you can flesh this out to three stanzas at least.:) Paul.
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7th Mar 2014 3:55am
Re: invocation...
7th Mar 2014 7:45am
Re: invocation...
7th Mar 2014 10:47am
precocious memories, how they linger
in our languorous corners....
top'o'th'pops, son.
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Re: invocation...
7th Mar 2014 2:28pm
The beauty, and the magic
of childhood's imagination...
and the sorrow of the tragic..loss--
when life steals our innocence....
wistful, and lovely, mo chara
of childhood's imagination...
and the sorrow of the tragic..loss--
when life steals our innocence....
wistful, and lovely, mo chara
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