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SLOW SATISFACTION
I am feeling the urge
you know the urge, right?
I thought so
are you feeling it too?
that warm tingle
making things grow
expand, harden
I can see you clearly do
well then it must be satisfied
let’s take it slow
make it last
until the shadows lengthen
meeting the night
after we will say
it was the best it’s ever been
but then decide
maybe we better try again tomorrow
just to be sure
you know the urge, right?
I thought so
are you feeling it too?
that warm tingle
making things grow
expand, harden
I can see you clearly do
well then it must be satisfied
let’s take it slow
make it last
until the shadows lengthen
meeting the night
after we will say
it was the best it’s ever been
but then decide
maybe we better try again tomorrow
just to be sure
Published 6th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 5th Jan 2019 8:45pm
6th Mar 2014 7:01pm
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6th Mar 2014 8:27pm
Definitely something that merits continuous practice...if we're thinking about the same thing, of course :)
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Jan 2019 8:45pm
6th Mar 2014 8:31pm
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6th Mar 2014 7:49pm
6th Mar 2014 8:29pm
I agree...kinda of a lather, rinse, repeat cycle :) I am never going to master the art so damn it if I don't have to practice all of the time :D
6th Mar 2014 8:47pm
6th Mar 2014 8:49pm
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 11:12am
7th Mar 2014 00:50am
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7th Mar 2014 4:46am
Yeah I'm pretty clueless about when she's in the mood...I need to be outright told so :) I am glad you saw the humor in this piece...thank you Tim!
7th Mar 2014 8:03pm
7th Mar 2014 8:50pm
Yeah, I'll never get that one right :) Thank you for reading my poem.
8th Mar 2014 3:18pm
8th Mar 2014 4:28pm
Wooooo Hooooo! That was my goal to make the reader smile...thank you for rewarding my efforts. It's a subject that wish to labor diligently to achieve perfection :)