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Perfect Fit
I want to kiss and hold your hand
then move down south and explore your land
I want to lick and suck your dick
then drink your cream so sweet and slick
I want to fuck and then make love
you' re the perfect fit just like a glove ♡♡♡
then move down south and explore your land
I want to lick and suck your dick
then drink your cream so sweet and slick
I want to fuck and then make love
you' re the perfect fit just like a glove ♡♡♡
Published 3rd Mar 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
3rd Mar 2014 8:48pm
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4th Mar 2014 1:45am
Thank you for your comment. This poem seemed to just flow out of me.....♡♡♡ :)
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
3rd Mar 2014 9:24pm
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You are so right, flowergirl-- I do my best erotic writing when I am in
a certain "frame of mind"..... ♡♡♡I am really glad you thought of it as hot.....
Thank you for your encouraging words!
a certain "frame of mind"..... ♡♡♡I am really glad you thought of it as hot.....
Thank you for your encouraging words!
4th Mar 2014 3:21am
5th Mar 2014 10:41pm
4th Mar 2014 6:21am
The title is appropriate in more then one way as your words all fit together so well. Vivid word pictures and yet a strong element of grace.
5th Mar 2014 10:44pm
Thank you for your praise and for getting this poem exactly how it was meant.... :) It is indeed a perfect fit on many levels.... ;) ♡♡♡
4th Mar 2014 9:59pm
9th Mar 2014 7:42pm
I saw your comment just now.....
Thank you kindly--Glad you enjoyed.... ;)
Thank you kindly--Glad you enjoyed.... ;)
5th Mar 2014 1:24am
Incredible scarlet, writing such a so hot poem, with perfect metered rhyme! Wonderful sexy ink!!!
5th Mar 2014 10:46pm
I feel flattered that you think my little poem sexy and hot....
It is in the erotic section and so I am happy to know it served its purpose...... ;) ♡♡♡
It is in the erotic section and so I am happy to know it served its purpose...... ;) ♡♡♡
14th Mar 2014 3:35pm
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18th Mar 2014 6:18am
Thank you for your compliment.....being that this poem is in the erotic section, I am taking your comment as a compliment, and hope it has the same effect on the person it was written for..... ;)♡♡♡
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20th Mar 2014 4:54am
I am grateful for you and all the other poets sharing ourselves creatively here at DU......:) ♡♡♡
20th Mar 2014 5:13am
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:41pm
4th Apr 2014 6:05am
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5th Apr 2014 4:52am
A standing ovation! This flatters me greatly and I am delighted my little poem affected you in such a delightful way......! ♡♡♡