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founder of a stream
she is rain
heavens muse for rebirth
i am a stream
a vein collective
of her fluid strength
that spurs me down
the valley in the arms
of the mountains
she is my resource
in her sustenance lies
a depth of growth
that empowers change
she is not content
to let me be
she urges me to become
i will become
i am becoming
i am a river
heavens muse for rebirth
i am a stream
a vein collective
of her fluid strength
that spurs me down
the valley in the arms
of the mountains
she is my resource
in her sustenance lies
a depth of growth
that empowers change
she is not content
to let me be
she urges me to become
i will become
i am becoming
i am a river
Published 2nd Mar 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
2nd Mar 2014 3:51pm
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4th Mar 2014 2:12am
A truly lovely thing to say Lady Crim. Stoked you got it girl. I'll never get bored of how writing does that. I write a feeling here. You feel it on the other side of the planet. That's just fucking cool. Always good to see you Brenda. Love and power girl. XO
2nd Mar 2014 4:02pm
4th Mar 2014 2:14am
Brother Hash. Flow I shall my friend. All power young man. You are appreciated. :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
2nd Mar 2014 6:08pm
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4th Mar 2014 2:18am
I reckon your right Nikki. I've learned in time to be happy with everything I write regardless. It is what it is. Though I've noticed I've been in a bit of groove of late. So, so this felt nice to write. Will do me good. Good on ya Nikki. Champion. :)
2nd Mar 2014 8:14pm
A beautifully written poem TS, gives me peace and makes me feel alive. Love it! XO
Thank you sweet lady. Couldn't make me happier to get you like that doll. That's a really nice thing. I got the same feeling from it. It made me feel calm. Always a smile when you RL me. Love and strength to you babe. XO
3rd Mar 2014 6:39am
my favourite part:
in her sustenance lies
a depth of growth
that empowers change
love your ink x
in her sustenance lies
a depth of growth
that empowers change
love your ink x
4th Mar 2014 2:23am
Your kind words and support are truly felt Heart. They mean much M'lady. I thank you. xo
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- Edited 26th Jun 2018 9:39pm
4th Mar 2014 1:53am
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4th Mar 2014 2:53am
I most times I don't know what I'm writing till I'm half way in Miss Mae. It had big feeling as it came out. Stoked that came through in the ink. A truly lovely comment Lily Mae. I do look forward to your thought on my writing. You have a lovely way of seeing things and I apologise for not reading you more. I get waylaid. It's my loss. I'm onto it! Thanks heaps girl. Appreciation large. :)
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
5th Mar 2014 8:37am
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1st May 2014 9:20am
Sorry Mia. Got lost there for a bit. Thank you for your kind words as usual. You are appreciated.
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6th Mar 2014 3:04am
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