Feel the drive...

I loved this. It has a fluidity to it that perfectly illustrated what you're saying. I found it both crazed and calculated at the same time. Maybe check for typos next time?

I recoiled as the bullet brushed a darkness against Your daughter.. it gave me chills to feel Death edging that close to her, all others looked Death in the eyes and tasted his wrath. Powerful write...Zacc*

Thanks so much HarleyQuinn..Im glad you read...I acyually read over this twice...guess I missed one lol! I'll fix now...thankyou...

Thankyou so much blueangel :-) everyone emerges unscathed but her...only for her to be driven as crazy as me after...

Hi I'm a wanna be singer and um this is gonna sound weird but this sounds really good when I put it to music so would you be okay if I made a cover of it (giving u credit) and posting it on vine?

I'd be fine with that yes :-) please send me a link so I can hear it!

Damn! In a good way....Xo

Lol! Always appreciated Rain :-) thankyou for reading...

The drive to action... Brutal.

Exactly Atakti...you feel it all the way to the crash...