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faded
giving in is as easy as exhaling
so easy it makes me dizzy when i'm in a mood
to play with the thought
close my eyes
that little smile
relax the grip
tilt left
and let my whole being slide of my soul
so easy it makes me dizzy when i'm in a mood
to play with the thought
close my eyes
that little smile
relax the grip
tilt left
and let my whole being slide of my soul
Published 1st Mar 2014
| Edited 2nd Mar 2014
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1st Mar 2014 3:10pm
1st Mar 2014 10:08pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 9:51pm
1st Mar 2014 3:16pm
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1st Mar 2014 10:09pm
Glad this got your interest Donovan. Good to hear from you, and welcome to DU.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
1st Mar 2014 4:37pm
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1st Mar 2014 10:22pm
As I've said before, your support and kind words mean a lot Miss Crim. Really. A lot of what I wrote seems to be just coming into focus now, perspective wise. Running into the right people can take time. And with time comes relative experience. I guess there's no point teaching one who isn't ready to listen. I'm listening. I do thank lovely lady. you are appreciated. All power and love Miss Crim. :)
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- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
1st Mar 2014 5:59pm
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1st Mar 2014 10:27pm
Words have more weight coming from the right people. And your words mean much Mia. Please know I get the same from yours. I do thank you girl. You mean much. :)
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 9:36pm
1st Mar 2014 10:02pm
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1st Mar 2014 10:12pm
Lol. That happens around here a bit UL. Stay level my friend. The slide is too easy. Thanks for being here. And welcome to DU.
1st Mar 2014 10:35pm
1st Mar 2014 11:05pm
I get the same from yours doll. Always look forward to your visits Tommie Lynn. I do thank you babe. XO
1st Mar 2014 11:00pm
1st Mar 2014 11:06pm
Always good to hear from you my friend. Your support is always well felt brother. I thank you. :)
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- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
2nd Mar 2014 1:41am
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2nd Mar 2014 2:21am
You're always so lovely and supportive Flower. I am so very grateful. You are appreciated doll. Thank you. :)
2nd Mar 2014 5:13am
Wonderful structure.. It gives a sense of glee, thinking of a relaxing state, and just letting the world slip by.
2nd Mar 2014 11:40am
Thanks heaps for you kind words and support Dude. Good to see you. Appreciated much brother.
3rd Mar 2014 6:33am
pointed structure... I love how your words make you feel the slipping away; so peaceful. Beautiful ink TS, very talented xx
4th Mar 2014 1:29am
Thanks heaps Miss Heart. Glad it got you. A lovely compliment. Good to see ya hun. You're support always felt. xo
3rd Mar 2014 4:05pm
sometimes nice to exist a little less
or a little bit further away
you've expressed something ive been aiming for.
or a little bit further away
you've expressed something ive been aiming for.
4th Mar 2014 1:36am
Love how writing does that. Great to see you in my realm Anna. Glad to felt it. Appreciated much girl.
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6th Mar 2014 3:07am
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