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tendrils twist
tendrils twist
against
luminous intent
our
whispers begin to shimmer
in iridescence
with inebriated senses, we inhale love's toxins
{exhaling remembrance, long since forgotten}
we tousle wildly
upon the hills of audaciousness
ravaging
as the aphrodisiac
infuses our systems chi
with ambrosia aroused
palates
pearlescent promises are deemed
above us, stars dangle dim
bare, embracing
meld
in elation
deeper
we sink in opulent dreams
gently releasing
tender breaths, accepting
sweet zeal of
tendrils twisting
against
luminous intent
our
whispers begin to shimmer
in iridescence
with inebriated senses, we inhale love's toxins
{exhaling remembrance, long since forgotten}
we tousle wildly
upon the hills of audaciousness
ravaging
as the aphrodisiac
infuses our systems chi
with ambrosia aroused
palates
pearlescent promises are deemed
above us, stars dangle dim
bare, embracing
meld
in elation
deeper
we sink in opulent dreams
gently releasing
tender breaths, accepting
sweet zeal of
tendrils twisting
Published 24th Feb 2014
| Edited 25th Feb 2014
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24th Feb 2014 10:42pm
alluring & arousing is your poem, Angel. unencumbered lovers beneath a sky of bashful stars. & the artwork you paired it with is fascinating...
25th Feb 2014 2:40pm
25th Feb 2014 4:25am
This is an exhilarating sensual celebration! My favorite passage:
"bare, embracing
meld
in elation"
happy happy intimacy! Bravisima Poeta!
"bare, embracing
meld
in elation"
happy happy intimacy! Bravisima Poeta!
25th Feb 2014 2:39pm
25th Feb 2014 12:24pm
Mmmmm what a yummy treat this was!
Beautiful sexy imagery at its best, very nicely woven my dear! :)
Beautiful sexy imagery at its best, very nicely woven my dear! :)
25th Feb 2014 2:39pm
Thank you kindly, Poetik... and for your sharp eyes too, in seeing my typo... It's much appreciated...I'm a stickler for it too... :/
25th Feb 2014 3:05pm
Love this Blue Angel,
The words standing alone then the spaces, it allowed me to enjoy every moment, controlling the pace, a pace that is essential for such a sensual write.
The words standing alone then the spaces, it allowed me to enjoy every moment, controlling the pace, a pace that is essential for such a sensual write.
25th Feb 2014 4:40pm
You touch exactly where I like it... that definitely was my intentions with this form to soften and guide the flow for a more sensual reading... thank you deeply for your lovely comment and for noticing the detail of it. :)
11th Mar 2014 00:20am
