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Serious Loving!
Serious Loving!
Holding you tight
I brace my hand securely on the wall
To take in your engorged throb
Reassuring I won't fall you held my
body close to yours
The air starts closing up around us
Felt like I was being sucked in to a whirlwind
Trying to catch my breath as you thrust harder into my wetness
Body alive with every insertion
His body quivering as our bodies burn
Wrapping your arms around my waist
Your body sweating inhaling my sweet aroma
Making your mind go crazy as we
sizzle
I opened wider taking in all of your throb
Your breathing gets harder gasping for air as you thrust
Sweetness overloads my insides
Feeling all hot and excited
Emotions keeps flying
Hearts pumping louder
Pulses racing like a stallion running wild and free
Soon I evaporate into the clouds
Almost ready to burst
Showering my lover with my wetness
Letting my vengeance unleash
As my sweetness drips down the thickness of his shaft
Felt his manhood jump
My lover letting out a loud moan
Now he's fading
Soaring silently
Floating high across the
Moonlit skies
Lost in the universe
Body locked deep within Me
Holding you tight
I brace my hand securely on the wall
To take in your engorged throb
Reassuring I won't fall you held my
body close to yours
The air starts closing up around us
Felt like I was being sucked in to a whirlwind
Trying to catch my breath as you thrust harder into my wetness
Body alive with every insertion
His body quivering as our bodies burn
Wrapping your arms around my waist
Your body sweating inhaling my sweet aroma
Making your mind go crazy as we
sizzle
I opened wider taking in all of your throb
Your breathing gets harder gasping for air as you thrust
Sweetness overloads my insides
Feeling all hot and excited
Emotions keeps flying
Hearts pumping louder
Pulses racing like a stallion running wild and free
Soon I evaporate into the clouds
Almost ready to burst
Showering my lover with my wetness
Letting my vengeance unleash
As my sweetness drips down the thickness of his shaft
Felt his manhood jump
My lover letting out a loud moan
Now he's fading
Soaring silently
Floating high across the
Moonlit skies
Lost in the universe
Body locked deep within Me
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19th Feb 2014 12:57pm
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re: Re: Serious Loving!
19th Feb 2014 1:00pm
Re: Serious Loving!
To take in your engorged throb..new description ..
you replace thrust by trust is it a new thought or a typo
we know what you mean
you replace thrust by trust is it a new thought or a typo
we know what you mean
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19th Feb 2014 1:01pm
Re: Serious Loving!
19th Feb 2014 5:26am
Hot, hot, and HOT! I remember those days! Get as much as you can, for when one gets older the flame doesn't burn like it once did; But you will always have hot memories that will make you smile.
Don't get me wrong, it's still all good, just not the same as it once was.
PS: I hope you don't mind, but I saved a copy to share with friends of mine. And no, I won't take credit for it either. I do take credit in being so lucky as to find it though! LOL
Don't get me wrong, it's still all good, just not the same as it once was.
PS: I hope you don't mind, but I saved a copy to share with friends of mine. And no, I won't take credit for it either. I do take credit in being so lucky as to find it though! LOL
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19th Feb 2014 1:02pm
Thanks Hun I'm happy that you wish to share my words with your friends muaahhh.
Re: Serious Loving!
19th Feb 2014 6:21am
Serious HOT loving here. Yet another poem that may make male readers wish they were with the narrator and women that they were her!
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19th Feb 2014 1:02pm
Re: Serious Loving!
19th Feb 2014 11:39pm
Well written, promoting steamy hot imagery, it allures and delivers an excellent condensed story in verse. Bravo!
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20th Feb 2014 9:16am
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20th Feb 2014 2:33pm
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21st Feb 2014 1:51am
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20th Feb 2014 9:37pm
HOT, SEXY and BRILIANT!!!
I adore your writes and lefts LOL!!
Awesome read Ms. LD!!!
Always been a FAN!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
I adore your writes and lefts LOL!!
Awesome read Ms. LD!!!
Always been a FAN!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
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21st Feb 2014 1:52am
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21st Feb 2014 4:23am
"Letting my vengeance unleash"....what an explosive line....you are brilliant! I am such a fan.
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21st Feb 2014 1:59pm
Re: Serious Loving!
21st Feb 2014 11:41am
Amazing, too many Good lines to quote!!
So Passionate & Ravenous!
Loooovveee the Black Art btw too!
So Passionate & Ravenous!
Loooovveee the Black Art btw too!
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21st Feb 2014 2:02pm
Thank you sista much love to you love being black and conscious it's wonderful muaahh.