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fallacy burns
i failed to see the fallacy of a love
that's intertwined
i had kept myself available to the back
door of my mind
i was fighting with an ego as lust held
the inner rooms
this fallacy i refused to rate
has a legacy of ruins
with an honest will I set my task in
hope the love unwound
through smoke and ash i could not deny
the damage that i found
i can not bear my actions be the destruction
of honest trust
through ashen tears i fight the rising flames
lit by this fallacy of lust
that's intertwined
i had kept myself available to the back
door of my mind
i was fighting with an ego as lust held
the inner rooms
this fallacy i refused to rate
has a legacy of ruins
with an honest will I set my task in
hope the love unwound
through smoke and ash i could not deny
the damage that i found
i can not bear my actions be the destruction
of honest trust
through ashen tears i fight the rising flames
lit by this fallacy of lust
Published 16th Feb 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
16th Feb 2014 3:58am
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That's a huge compliment Sir Poet. And felt deep. For you eyes and continued support and RL I remain humble and grateful my friend. I thank you Sir.
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
16th Feb 2014 4:16am
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16th Feb 2014 4:19am
Your words say much about the man speaking them Sir. Humbled shall we be. Again I thank you Sir poet. Truly.
16th Feb 2014 5:33am
You're too kind to me Tommie. Your support never stop girl. That means loads lady. Really. Thanks large Tommie Lynn. XO
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
16th Feb 2014 6:50am
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17th Feb 2014 8:18am
I'm blown away by your words Nikki. Seriously. Big smiles. Big smiles. I thought it fell into place easy. Guess coz that's where they were supposed to go. For your RL and heavy duty comment I am a humble lad, Nik. I wannabe a writer when I grow up. Never been around other writers before. It's doing me and my writing a world of good. You guys rock. This is fun. Thanks Nik. xo
16th Feb 2014 2:41pm
I feel you, Twitch, floating on the salty rivers of admiration and compassion. Your ability to slash and sooth and capture with words is so painfully amazing. xo
17th Feb 2014 8:23am
Same feel, same river Miss Chi. It is a privilege to share the flow lovely Lady. Appreciation grows Miss Chi. I thank you. XO
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
16th Feb 2014 4:06pm
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17th Feb 2014 8:36am
Firstly. Thank you so very much. Sad that you relate though it's always great to connect through words. You are one of my poets Miss Crim. Your words have enormous weight. Please know this. Humble city, big time. Huge support. All power to you lovely Lady. I thank you. :)