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eaves overflow
wind breathes in my window
taking a little of my sanity as it leaves
with her ebb stems the flow
that keeps me stable under eaves
Published 15th Feb 2014
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15th Feb 2014 4:44am
15th Feb 2014 5:05am
Thank darlin. Always keen for your opinions doll. Appreciated large TL. XO
15th Feb 2014 5:17am
15th Feb 2014 5:27am
Allo Miss Brinda. Superstoked you liked it doll. Always pleasure to have you drop by Brinda. You are appreciated.
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- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
15th Feb 2014 3:07pm
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16th Feb 2014 00:05am
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- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
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16th Feb 2014 00:07am
I appreciate that Lady Flower. A lovely compliment doll. I do thank you. :)
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- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
15th Feb 2014 9:30pm
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16th Feb 2014 00:11am
This one felt a little softer to write if you get my drift Nikki. It had a nice feeling. Coming from you the compliment has big weight Nikki. Thank you doll.
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- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
15th Feb 2014 10:21pm
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16th Feb 2014 00:16am
A truly lovely reaction that is Miss Crim. You brought a smile to my own face. Appreciation is felt deep M'lady. I do thank you.
16th Feb 2014 5:28pm
Stasis and transition - to balance yourself in the middle makes for a stable position. Heart-touching poetic words, Twitch.
17th Feb 2014 7:53am
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