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Hey man,
Ever heard the definition
Of everything they said you could never see?
What's that between your fingers?
The dispositioned
Deity
Rolled up tight and warm
Reducing their false realisms
To ashes.
2/22/11
Ever heard the definition
Of everything they said you could never see?
What's that between your fingers?
The dispositioned
Deity
Rolled up tight and warm
Reducing their false realisms
To ashes.
2/22/11
Published 24th Feb 2011
| Edited 26th Feb 2011
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24th Feb 2011 8:13am
"Of everything you they said you could never see?"
"Of everything they said you couldn't see?"
"Of everything they said you couldn't see?"
25th Feb 2011 00:40am
26th Feb 2011 2:02am
maybe it means?:
"Of everything about you, they said you could never see?"
i guess it's the "you they" that confuses me.
"Of everything about you, they said you could never see?"
i guess it's the "you they" that confuses me.
26th Feb 2011 2:33am
27th Feb 2011 7:13am
i have to say this is ok peom could use more passion if you was to really enjoy marijuana maybe it would had more meaning
27th Feb 2011 5:46pm
yeah you're right :) haha
i havent smoked weed in years... this is a half assed poem to be honest with you haha
i wrote better drug inspired poems when i was actually doing drugs ( duh) but i wrote this for fun basically. and i hate it. this is probbly the worst poem i have written this year
i havent smoked weed in years... this is a half assed poem to be honest with you haha
i wrote better drug inspired poems when i was actually doing drugs ( duh) but i wrote this for fun basically. and i hate it. this is probbly the worst poem i have written this year
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27th Feb 2011 6:03pm
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27th Feb 2011 11:35pm
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16th Mar 2011 3:35pm
yeah that song was kindof my muse for that week :)
its a good song
but i dont like this poem much
so thanks
its a good song
but i dont like this poem much
so thanks