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'In ink Eye Dream...'
Oh glorious dream
so unattainable you seem
Will you be
my inspiration?
flow into my soul
feel me...in MY station
kiss me blind,
with a lover's hue
promise the sunshine
n' sweet skies of blue
Will you be
the beauty that
I write of?
an angel come
to save me
fallen' from above
my breast to suckle,
make my knees buckle
for the warmth I'd cuddle
tearing into a joyous puddle
sweet dream
, just tell me
you've no hesitation
an' say you'll be,
my inspiration!
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- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
7th Feb 2014 8:36pm
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7th Feb 2014 9:20pm
Thanks bro. I'm happy you enjoyed n appreciate your support as always. :) looking forward to when u post again :)
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7th Feb 2014 11:43pm
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8th Feb 2014 1:28am
Lol me? Nah that's my PEN that's does that! I just do hand walking lol... Thanks big time bro. Truly appreciate ur continued support :)
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- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
8th Feb 2014 7:24am
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8th Feb 2014 12:36pm
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8th Feb 2014 12:23pm
Ah, Poe! Who wouldn't want to be your inspiration? Sweet wording with true longing sipping through the lines. Wonderful write, babe!
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8th Feb 2014 12:39pm
I'm not sure, but hey it's sweet of you to say it! lol
Truly thank you my lovely lady :) appreciate you always :)
Truly thank you my lovely lady :) appreciate you always :)
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- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
8th Feb 2014 6:12pm
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8th Feb 2014 6:52pm
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10th Feb 2014 7:28am
Stunning piece Poe, I love reading your work and being swept away with it x
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10th Feb 2014 11:46am
Aaaawww Heart, you move my heart to fast beats! :) thank you so much dear friend, appreciate you :)
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16th Feb 2014 2:21pm
Splendid Scribe Poetik, tender and sweet
fav lines:
kiss me blind,
with a lover's hue
fav lines:
kiss me blind,
with a lover's hue
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16th Feb 2014 4:26pm
Well gosh I feel so spoiled by you today! But I love it! lol
Thank you sweetheart, truly treasure you n your support :)
Thank you sweetheart, truly treasure you n your support :)
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- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
16th Feb 2014 4:29pm
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16th Feb 2014 5:09pm
Yea, hence my curse huh? lol
Always n forever I appreciate n adore you
my dear sweet friend... Thank you :)
Always n forever I appreciate n adore you
my dear sweet friend... Thank you :)