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What The Eyes Can't Hear
The razor breaks
My skin quickly
Leaving bright red
Rivers which scream
Silently in pain
I try to
Hide my song
Under clothes piles
In my room
Why there? Well...
Why would't I?
No one can
Hear the words
They don't bother
To peak through
The obvious cracks
In my music
They don't want
To see what
Their eyes cannot
Seem to hear...
My skin quickly
Leaving bright red
Rivers which scream
Silently in pain
I try to
Hide my song
Under clothes piles
In my room
Why there? Well...
Why would't I?
No one can
Hear the words
They don't bother
To peak through
The obvious cracks
In my music
They don't want
To see what
Their eyes cannot
Seem to hear...
Published 5th Feb 2014
| Edited 8th Jun 2014
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5th Feb 2014 11:08pm
Really cool write here Jaimee-Leigh, An intense intro into a dark confessional of your loneliness and pain finally presenting the entree, Great Job!
Cheers!
Cheers!
6th Feb 2014 4:08pm
9th Feb 2014 9:07pm
Ooh wow Jaimee is is sadly beautiful
No one can
Hear the words
They don't bother
To peak through
The obvious cracks
In my music
They don't want
To see what
Their eyes cannot
Seem to see...
I love these lines very deep like tht of the razor
No one can
Hear the words
They don't bother
To peak through
The obvious cracks
In my music
They don't want
To see what
Their eyes cannot
Seem to see...
I love these lines very deep like tht of the razor
10th Feb 2014 4:08pm
19th Apr 2014 8:32am
