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Lumpy Mattresses And Cheap Pillows
I envy the transparent
everything is clear
but I live where everything
is murky,
more than doubt floats
through the air here,
the mist comes
and it goes
but it leaves behind
droplets of yesterday,
fear begins to resonate
somewhere
inside of someone,
the cloud dancer
has touched ground
and nothing shall ever be the same,
wishes have caused chaos amongst us
and I cant do it any longer,
when the destined stars collide
there shall be light,
so until then.
everything is clear
but I live where everything
is murky,
more than doubt floats
through the air here,
the mist comes
and it goes
but it leaves behind
droplets of yesterday,
fear begins to resonate
somewhere
inside of someone,
the cloud dancer
has touched ground
and nothing shall ever be the same,
wishes have caused chaos amongst us
and I cant do it any longer,
when the destined stars collide
there shall be light,
so until then.
Published 4th Feb 2014
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4th Feb 2014 4:47am
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4th Feb 2014 4:48am
4th Feb 2014 3:29pm
Transparency, mists and light. I like the flow thru the different states of mind and the subtle hint with the title that perhaps the lack of clarity is linked to sleeping shit-house... hence I lay here awake reading poetry on a lumpy mattress... I'm feeling the coil sprung words!!!
I really like...
"the cloud dancer
has touched ground"
Another solid piece of writing, Nikki.
I really like...
"the cloud dancer
has touched ground"
Another solid piece of writing, Nikki.
5th Feb 2014 4:29pm
It reads with the feel of a plea...
That's a breathtaking work Nikki!!!
And in perfect delivery the last stanza really ramps it up!!!
That's a breathtaking work Nikki!!!
And in perfect delivery the last stanza really ramps it up!!!
7th Feb 2014 3:03am
the cloud dancer
has touched ground
and nothing shall ever be the same,
wishes have caused chaos amongst us
If I was to play the ultimate dark joke on humanity it would be to make all wishcraft true for just 1 generation. Then take it away and let them all sort it out.
has touched ground
and nothing shall ever be the same,
wishes have caused chaos amongst us
If I was to play the ultimate dark joke on humanity it would be to make all wishcraft true for just 1 generation. Then take it away and let them all sort it out.
