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Importance ( really short)
There are three souls
Two girls
And a lamp here
I wonder where importance lies
And whose soul should be cherished
Who should be left to die
Two girls
And a lamp here
I wonder where importance lies
And whose soul should be cherished
Who should be left to die
Published 1st Feb 2014
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1st Feb 2014 3:12am
Anonymous
1st Feb 2014 3:26am
hmmmm....interesting piece...
1st Feb 2014 3:52am
Anonymous
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1st Feb 2014 7:32pm
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1st Feb 2014 7:39pm
i try to purposefully leave my poetry open for interpretation because your interpretation teaches you about yourself
5th Feb 2014 5:22pm
I adore poetry that works with insinuation like a negative space. This is lovely.
5th Feb 2014 7:54pm
Thanks a lot with your encouragement and kind words-thus far people like you make me feel outstandingly great and alive... Thank you.