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dreamcatcher
he gave away his dreams
when he gave away his soul
his love served high on a platter
to the fairest bidder sold
the more he gave the less he held
with no thought for tomorrow
though treading lightly the ground gave way
for the cold descent to sorrow
when he gave away his soul
his love served high on a platter
to the fairest bidder sold
the more he gave the less he held
with no thought for tomorrow
though treading lightly the ground gave way
for the cold descent to sorrow
Published 28th Jan 2014
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28th Jan 2014 11:59am
"The more he gave the less he held
with no thought for tomorrow "
That's loud and clear Twitch!
Great ink, enjoyed. XO
with no thought for tomorrow "
That's loud and clear Twitch!
Great ink, enjoyed. XO
28th Jan 2014 12:04pm
With the right girl is the only way to go TL. With the wrong one it just leaves you empty. Thank you Tommie. XO
28th Jan 2014 12:13pm
28th Jan 2014 6:48pm
Makes me want to soothe and hug. Touching and so sad that I can hardly bear to read it. You composed a fine piece, Twitch.
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28th Jan 2014 7:58pm
I Love it. It really touched me. KEEP UP WITH YOUR POEMS THEY ARE AWESOME
Anonymous
28th Jan 2014 10:08pm
Emotionally beautiful spill, Sway! I felt this one...xo
28th Jan 2014 11:17pm
Love till it hurts but when it all fails recovery may be never forthwith. Good write.
28th Jan 2014 11:21pm
29th Jan 2014 00:16am
he gave away his dreams
when he gave away his soul
Should never happen but it does... If I could scoop you up and cuddle you I would.
Lovely read Twitch x
when he gave away his soul
Should never happen but it does... If I could scoop you up and cuddle you I would.
Lovely read Twitch x
