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the second story
One step would let it slip away
Ignore the past and self decay
But if we die we're just that day
While all else moves on
Though life cannot be questioned we live with doubt
guess all the love we lived without
wasnt stored in our savings account
Now that we're all grown up
And I know its getting old,
All the stories we have to tell;
all the darkness that surrounds them
such things we wish we hadn't felt
Chorus
But now you're on the second story
I know for you made it here with me
I love you more and more each day
dont let them bring you down
Ignore the past and self decay
But if we die we're just that day
While all else moves on
Though life cannot be questioned we live with doubt
guess all the love we lived without
wasnt stored in our savings account
Now that we're all grown up
And I know its getting old,
All the stories we have to tell;
all the darkness that surrounds them
such things we wish we hadn't felt
Chorus
But now you're on the second story
I know for you made it here with me
I love you more and more each day
dont let them bring you down
Published 22nd Jan 2014
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25th Jan 2014 8:15pm
great theme and metaphors. The first two stanzas also have great rhythm and rhyme. You could probably get the third one to have the same shyme scheme also.
