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Yes, That's the Word: Alone
All
they do
is leave.
And I am
left to
wonder
why no
one cares
enough.
I am
not
enough, I
suppose.
they do
is leave.
And I am
left to
wonder
why no
one cares
enough.
I am
not
enough, I
suppose.
Published 21st Jan 2014
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21st Jan 2014 11:40am
21st Jan 2014 1:56pm
21st Jan 2014 2:13pm
Thanks for the honesty - I have to agree. Sometimes I just post things without taking the time to revise. I might later.
21st Jan 2014 3:46pm
Great emphasis on the word enough. Very relatable. And don't forget, you are enough.
21st Jan 2014 10:00pm
U know Monster i have to agree C.R Powers. But it does have potential just need to carry your thoughts and emotions guiding them into a beautiful piece. I do like what you have here, a revised version be awesome
21st Jan 2014 10:16pm