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INFINITY
"Someday, death will take us to another star."
~Vincent Van Gogh
Painter paint star-spattered paths--purple passion patterns;
Grant me glimpses of immortality in indigo inspirations,
Guide me through galaxies glued inside translucent eyelids,
With pulsating ivory globes.
Ascending into your azure aspirations,
Fractured atoms crumbling into cerulean strings,
Unimpeded by crawling speed of light,
Suspended--momentarily held by grasping moon's golden blood.
Hurtling through cosmic cobalt chaos,
Catapulted through vermillion vortex,
Realms rescinding into realms,
Macrocosms into macrocosms--malleable meldings.
Absorbing ancient ancestral dust,
Ten times ten thousand particles emblazened,
Universal union--super-nova soul's rebirth,
Adrift within a Van Gogh sky.
(inspired by legendary artist, Vincent Van Gogh's painting,Starry Night.)
Entered in the '4x4' comp.
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Re: INFINITY
20th Jan 2014 9:11am
My Sorceress this is Awesome works sweets!!
Awesome write!!
Love it!!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome write!!
Love it!!!
Sir Lancelott
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20th Jan 2014 9:22am
Greetings, my Knight!
I wish to thank thee for thy more than generous words of praise! Though hast left me with a loss of words, and most honored--indeed!
It is glad that I am, to be certain, that my poem hast brought thee enjoyment!
It is always a pleasure to hath thee within my realm, Sir Lancelot!
I wish to thank thee for thy more than generous words of praise! Though hast left me with a loss of words, and most honored--indeed!
It is glad that I am, to be certain, that my poem hast brought thee enjoyment!
It is always a pleasure to hath thee within my realm, Sir Lancelot!
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20th Jan 2014 9:43am
Love the portrait you paint Enchantress! Stellar sighs in Van Gogh's sky. Superbly written dear.
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20th Jan 2014 9:57am
Awwww...Jake,
Thank you so very much my Friend, for taking the time to leave your generous, creative comments beneath my poem....appreciated--indeed!
An extra thanks, as well, for honoring me with the reading-list addition! :)x
Thank you so very much my Friend, for taking the time to leave your generous, creative comments beneath my poem....appreciated--indeed!
An extra thanks, as well, for honoring me with the reading-list addition! :)x
Re: INFINITY
20th Jan 2014 9:49am
As a lover of Van Gogh and a spiritualist I love this!! Especially
"grant me glimpses of immortality in indigo inspirations"
Such an inspiring write.
"grant me glimpses of immortality in indigo inspirations"
Such an inspiring write.
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20th Jan 2014 10:06am
It is always a pleasure to welcome a new reviewer to my realm!
Thank you ever soo much for taking the time to read this piece, and for your gracious, generous words of praise...All mean soo very much to me--to be sure!
A special thanks, also, for the reading-list add! That is always an honor!
I am glad that i could inspire you! Please feel free to visit my realm, any time! You are most welcome--indeed!
Thank you ever soo much for taking the time to read this piece, and for your gracious, generous words of praise...All mean soo very much to me--to be sure!
A special thanks, also, for the reading-list add! That is always an honor!
I am glad that i could inspire you! Please feel free to visit my realm, any time! You are most welcome--indeed!
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20th Jan 2014 10:31am
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20th Jan 2014 10:41am
HG,
Thanks ever soo...for your lovely, generous comments! I am honored--indeed!
I appreciate the time you spent, reading this piece, and for you support! ALL mean so very much to me--to be certain!x
Thanks ever soo...for your lovely, generous comments! I am honored--indeed!
I appreciate the time you spent, reading this piece, and for you support! ALL mean so very much to me--to be certain!x
Re: INFINITY
20th Jan 2014 10:39am
I really like Van Gogh, Enchantress,
went to Arles in Provence once
just to soak up the atmosphere
and the light, which he caught so
strikingly...what can I say, then,
except that this is such a striking
piece, beautiful..:)
went to Arles in Provence once
just to soak up the atmosphere
and the light, which he caught so
strikingly...what can I say, then,
except that this is such a striking
piece, beautiful..:)
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Paul, my special friend,
You have warmed my heart with your thoughtful, lovely comments! You have honored me!xx
I always look forward to you comments....your continued support always means so very much to me!
Wow... to actually have been able to visit the location where Van Gogh created his famous master piece, "Starry Night!" A bit envious, i am! LOL!
You have warmed my heart with your thoughtful, lovely comments! You have honored me!xx
I always look forward to you comments....your continued support always means so very much to me!
Wow... to actually have been able to visit the location where Van Gogh created his famous master piece, "Starry Night!" A bit envious, i am! LOL!
Re: INFINITY
My dear Enchantress.
Spellbound by this work my friend. You shot me in to space along with your words.
"Unimpeded, by crawling speed of light", amongst many.
Loving your ink my dear. Loving it. Thank you as always for sharing Enchantress.
Spellbound by this work my friend. You shot me in to space along with your words.
"Unimpeded, by crawling speed of light", amongst many.
Loving your ink my dear. Loving it. Thank you as always for sharing Enchantress.
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re: Re: INFINITY
20th Jan 2014 11:00am
TS...Dear friend, and faithful follower,
Thank you ever soo much for taking the time to read my poem, and for your beautiful, generous words of praise! All mean so very much to me--to be sure! x
Delighted to have 'under my spell!'
Thank you ever soo much for taking the time to read my poem, and for your beautiful, generous words of praise! All mean so very much to me--to be sure! x
Delighted to have 'under my spell!'
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20th Jan 2014 11:21am
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20th Jan 2014 11:55am
Welcome to my realm, John! I am always glad whenever a new reviewer leaves comments beneath my pieces!
Thank you, ever soo much, for you thoughtful, generous comments, and for taking the time to read my poem! All are appreciated--to be certain!
I am pleased that you enjoyed your ride into Van Gogh's sky! Please feel free to visit , anytime!
Thank you, ever soo much, for you thoughtful, generous comments, and for taking the time to read my poem! All are appreciated--to be certain!
I am pleased that you enjoyed your ride into Van Gogh's sky! Please feel free to visit , anytime!
Re: INFINITY
20th Jan 2014 2:35pm
this was one of the most beautiful pictures ever painted in my mind's eye...thanks! that is exactly what i needed to see this early morning...:D
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22nd Jan 2014 2:35pm
Welcome, to my realm! I am always delighted to have a new reviewer!
Thank you for taking the time to read this piece! You have honored me with your gracious, generous comments, and i am appreciative---to be certain!
I am glad that my words were able to bring a positive beginning to your day!
Please feel free to visit, any time!
Thank you for taking the time to read this piece! You have honored me with your gracious, generous comments, and i am appreciative---to be certain!
I am glad that my words were able to bring a positive beginning to your day!
Please feel free to visit, any time!
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22nd Jan 2014 3:35pm
OH...thank you also for the honor of adding this to your reading list! SOO very appreciated, my friend!
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re: Re: INFINITY
22nd Jan 2014 2:24pm
Magdalena,my friend,
Thank you for your visit, and for leaving your 'stellar' thoughts beneath this piece! Both are ever so appreciated!
Your generous comments have, in turn, inspired me!
Thank you for your visit, and for leaving your 'stellar' thoughts beneath this piece! Both are ever so appreciated!
Your generous comments have, in turn, inspired me!
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22nd Jan 2014 2:44pm
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22nd Jan 2014 2:39pm
Thank you, Hashman! Please know that your continued support means so very much to me, my friend!
Sioch`ain leat!
Sioch`ain leat!
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re: Re: INFINITY
22nd Jan 2014 3:02pm
SW,my friend,
Thank you--deeply--for taking the time to read my poem, and for your (more than ) generous compliments!
I am truly glad that you appreciated the astral imagery, and my incorporation of alliteration! (urr...ummm...this is one of my favorite poetic devices--obviously (GOL!)
Please know that your loyal following means so very much to me---to be sure! :))
Thank you--deeply--for taking the time to read my poem, and for your (more than ) generous compliments!
I am truly glad that you appreciated the astral imagery, and my incorporation of alliteration! (urr...ummm...this is one of my favorite poetic devices--obviously (GOL!)
Please know that your loyal following means so very much to me---to be sure! :))
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Anonymous
20th Jan 2014 7:21pm
I would have to echo each and every one of the amazing poets who have already commented. This piece is ingenious, Enchantress! Beautifully written! Bravo my friend! Bravoooooo! Xo
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re: Re: INFINITY
22nd Jan 2014 3:19pm
Rain, my dear Friend,
I bow in honor, and humility, to your (implied), 'applause' of approval!
Please know how very much your comments mean to me, and how i always look forward to reading your thoughtful words of encouragement! Xo
I bow in honor, and humility, to your (implied), 'applause' of approval!
Please know how very much your comments mean to me, and how i always look forward to reading your thoughtful words of encouragement! Xo
Re: INFINITY
21st Jan 2014 5:13pm
I had to.close my eyes after reading this just to make sure I was there. Your words are a masterpiece on a black canvas and I'm loving the image. I want to write like you when I get older.
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22nd Jan 2014 3:30pm
Wow! PS,
I don't know quite what to say....
Your words have touched me, soul-deep!
Thank you --soo very much--for taking the time to visit my realm, and for your awesome compliments!
ALL are appreciated--to be certain!
It is always a pleasure to welcome a new reviewer within my world! Please know that you are most welcome, any time!
I don't know quite what to say....
Your words have touched me, soul-deep!
Thank you --soo very much--for taking the time to visit my realm, and for your awesome compliments!
ALL are appreciated--to be certain!
It is always a pleasure to welcome a new reviewer within my world! Please know that you are most welcome, any time!
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27th Jan 2014 4:29pm
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28th Jan 2014 00:55am
Thank you,so very much, UnheardSpeaker!
I appreciate the time you took to read, and to leave your thoughts beneath my poem!
It is always such a pleasure to have a new reviewer of my work! Please know that you are always most welcome within my realm!
Before your gracious words, I am humbled, and honored--to be sure.
I appreciate the time you took to read, and to leave your thoughts beneath my poem!
It is always such a pleasure to have a new reviewer of my work! Please know that you are always most welcome within my realm!
Before your gracious words, I am humbled, and honored--to be sure.
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re: Re: INFINITY
29th Jan 2014 10:15pm
Aaahhh....Gabriel, mo Chara,
Gazing at the beauty of paintings....welll....I simply permit my imagination to soar--unbound! (or something like that :p )
I am always delighted to have you visiting within my realm! Thank you ever so much for your lovely, sweet compliments! Appreciated!!!!
You make my soul smile!! xo
Gazing at the beauty of paintings....welll....I simply permit my imagination to soar--unbound! (or something like that :p )
I am always delighted to have you visiting within my realm! Thank you ever so much for your lovely, sweet compliments! Appreciated!!!!
You make my soul smile!! xo
Re: INFINITY
1st Feb 2014 3:35am
You have captured his style beautifully,with your words...This hurt in all of the right places my friend.
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Jasper, my dear Friend,
Your visits, and your thoughtful, gracious comments always mean so very much to me.
However, i must tell you, that coming from one, soo artistically gifted, these compliments are special...your words bring honor to my humble poem...i could feel the gentle heart-hugs.
Go raibh mile maith agat! xox
Your visits, and your thoughtful, gracious comments always mean so very much to me.
However, i must tell you, that coming from one, soo artistically gifted, these compliments are special...your words bring honor to my humble poem...i could feel the gentle heart-hugs.
Go raibh mile maith agat! xox
Re: INFINITY
7th Jun 2014 2:53pm
Stars in our eyes - enchanting one - pulsating ivory globes that take us everywhere - much enjoyed
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7th Jun 2014 3:45pm
Whale, mo Chara,
Thank you, ever so much, for visiting within my realm, and for your gracious, thoughtful comments. Thank you, also, for the listing--such an honor, to be sure!
ALL of these are very deeply appreciated!!
Thank you, ever so much, for visiting within my realm, and for your gracious, thoughtful comments. Thank you, also, for the listing--such an honor, to be sure!
ALL of these are very deeply appreciated!!