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Muse
She speaks: delirium voices within a fever dream.
Harmonizing.
A choir of angels
singing the praise
of demonic intent:
the pre-asylum wound.
She is the post-asylum infection:
melody suppurating
from an astral head injury.
Our dog demands sacrifice.
Harmonizing.
A choir of angels
singing the praise
of demonic intent:
the pre-asylum wound.
She is the post-asylum infection:
melody suppurating
from an astral head injury.
Our dog demands sacrifice.
Published 16th Feb 2011
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16th Feb 2011 2:58am
11th Mar 2011 4:56am
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11th Mar 2011 4:55am
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Thanks ImperfectedStone. What happens in the asylum, stays in the asylum. But if you want a brief peek, read Who's "running the asylum." "Mary's vigil" is a glimpse at my pre-asylum wound.
26th Feb 2011 5:08am
Thanks, Ray. Dogs and us "crazy" folks seem to have a strange attraction. It's a given that all poets have noticed that dog is god spelled backwards. Speaking of dogs, I love that set up and knock down you performed in the forum post: "prose."
Set up:
i have this story i'm working on about my third dog.
while the story pretty much tells itself,
capturing life-like dialog is a real bitch.
Knock down: the poem disguised as an excerpt of a short story about your third dog- Priceless, man!
Set up:
i have this story i'm working on about my third dog.
while the story pretty much tells itself,
capturing life-like dialog is a real bitch.
Knock down: the poem disguised as an excerpt of a short story about your third dog- Priceless, man!