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Somethings up with J̶a̶c̶k̶.

"Somethings up with J̶a̶c̶k̶, Somethings up with J̶a̶c̶k̶!
Don't know when we're ever gonna get him back.
He's all alone in there, locked away inside.
Never says a word-
Hope he hasn't died."
But little did they know
That J̶a̶c̶k̶ was dead from the beginning.

Most of them never knew what was wrong with him
They just Bowed their heads and ignored him
Causing greater pain with no one to talk to
He knows this is getting out of hand

J̶a̶c̶k̶ is suffering from great loss
The loss of his love, S̶a̶l̶l̶y̶
He's never felt so dead and empty in his life.
The only things keeping his grip
Are the hopes that he will see her again
That happiness will heal this sadness,
Hoping the gates of hell will close,
And this scar of insanity will vanish.

S̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ Is locked in a tower,
In a land far, far away
Waiting for her prince to come
And set her free for good
But there's invisible wall covering the castle
Some call this wall an unbreakable force
When I call it a dreadful curse
Then others call it the law.
Written by BlackaToasty
Published | Edited 20th Jan 2014
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