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Measure of a man

in the darkness of near dawn
I lie beside you, I have yet to sleep,
still feeling your lips on my skin
as you breathe rythmically next to me
your kiss is incendiary, your body
a work of the finest art
but no matter how incredibly alive
I feel while making love to your body
I've actually fallen so much harder
for your indomitable heart

Written by juon

Published 15th Jan 2014

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Anonymous

- Edited 16th May 2018 11:41am

15th Jan 2014 1:18pm

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juon

15th Jan 2014 5:45pm

just because I said that YOU personally suck does not mean that I ever said that I am good. Point me to one place where I ever said that I was better than anyone else, okay psycho?

And moreso than the issue of you sucking at poetry is the fact that you pollute this site with your psychotic trash. You are ruining this site.