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Nature's Code
as a ghost he comes and goes
spreading his wisdom to and fro
with eyes dispelling nature's code
the secrets of hell start to unfold
she gazes beyond[i]
[i]the moon's outstretched arms
and felt the taste of his tainted charm
like a silver laced lyric, he came nearer
twisting souls tighten below salvation
the creature is borne on the wings of Death's elation
finding solace, he whispers in chords; a song of lightning
mortal bones fracture under the breath of abandon stimulation
[i]resonate the lithesome words[i]
[i]their destined push is gone[i]
[i]as the thief unheard[i]
[i]tis deeply stirred[i][/font]
Published 14th Jan 2014
| Edited 16th Jan 2014
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14th Jan 2014 8:03pm
she gazes beyond
the moon's outstretched arms
and felt the taste of his tainted charm
like a silver laced Eagle's lyric, he came nearer
Ooh how I feel this^^^ and the longing tht yearns wow Blue Angel this is beautiful n love the blue font awesome write
the moon's outstretched arms
and felt the taste of his tainted charm
like a silver laced Eagle's lyric, he came nearer
Ooh how I feel this^^^ and the longing tht yearns wow Blue Angel this is beautiful n love the blue font awesome write
14th Jan 2014 10:35pm
15th Jan 2014 00:40am
that ghostly, silent thief, so like a poet. & it's a beautiful choice of artwork...
15th Jan 2014 12:59pm
15th Jan 2014 1:03pm
16th Jan 2014 6:03am
In reading this I have been taken back into time, to the Young Classic stories that first introduced me to Greek Mythology. Lovely work here.
17th Jan 2014 4:42am
Beautiful are you and pen sweets!!
Awesome write!!
Enjoyed the read!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome write!!
Enjoyed the read!!
Sir Lancelott
Anonymous
18th Jan 2014 11:17pm
"she gazes beyond
the moon's outstretched arms
and felt the taste of his tainted charm
like a silver laced lyric, he came nearer"
^^^^gosh, that was lovely! The entire piece is written exquisitely, but that stanza was a favorite.....Xo
19th Jan 2014 8:34pm
19th Jan 2014 9:00pm
"she gazes beyond
the moon's outstretched arms
and felt the taste of his tainted charm
like a silver laced lyric, he came nearer"
That stanza killed me as well...amazing piece BlueAngel...wow :-)
the moon's outstretched arms
and felt the taste of his tainted charm
like a silver laced lyric, he came nearer"
That stanza killed me as well...amazing piece BlueAngel...wow :-)
11th Mar 2014 8:22am