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I see him hurt and I feel his pain and agony.
I see him love and I feel his trust fade away.
I see him bleed and I feel his death.
I see him fade away and I feel his soul cry out.
I see him disappear and I feel his soul being lost forever.
I see he's gone and I feel his rage against life.
I see his body lying there and I feel his pain flowing with mine.
I see his blood and I feel his life flow into mine.
I see his life end and I feel his peace over power my sorrow.
I see him no more and yet I feel him everywhere.
I see him love and I feel his trust fade away.
I see him bleed and I feel his death.
I see him fade away and I feel his soul cry out.
I see him disappear and I feel his soul being lost forever.
I see he's gone and I feel his rage against life.
I see his body lying there and I feel his pain flowing with mine.
I see his blood and I feel his life flow into mine.
I see his life end and I feel his peace over power my sorrow.
I see him no more and yet I feel him everywhere.
Published 14th Jan 2014
| Edited 15th Feb 2014
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12th May 2014 4:35am
yea that was truly an awesome fuckin read, at first i wasn't sure what to make of it, me being a mortal and all,but i am thinking maybe i got the essence of it,i love that deep cryptic stuff,i seldom write that way anymore,i'll have to read some more of your work later.peace
9th Jul 2014 1:53am