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Runaway Train
The doors are closing,
Hold on tight
This train is leaving,
no more platforms in sight.
Keep on moving,
Cannot control the speed
You told me to let go
To give into this need...
It is what it is...
But it feels like a...
Runaway train
Burning up the track
Runaway train
Cannot stop, no going back
Moving under the starry light,
just you and me tonight
just you and me tonight...
It’s a crazy magnetism
That’s crackling between
Behind my chest it’s electric
Not felt before or seen...
It is what it is...
But it feels like a...
Runaway train
Burning up the track
Runaway train
Cannot stop, no going back
Moving under the starry light,
just you and me tonight
just you and me tonight..
Runaway train
Burning up the track
Moving under the starry light...
Can I be yours
...until sunlight?
Hold on tight
This train is leaving,
no more platforms in sight.
Keep on moving,
Cannot control the speed
You told me to let go
To give into this need...
It is what it is...
But it feels like a...
Runaway train
Burning up the track
Runaway train
Cannot stop, no going back
Moving under the starry light,
just you and me tonight
just you and me tonight...
It’s a crazy magnetism
That’s crackling between
Behind my chest it’s electric
Not felt before or seen...
It is what it is...
But it feels like a...
Runaway train
Burning up the track
Runaway train
Cannot stop, no going back
Moving under the starry light,
just you and me tonight
just you and me tonight..
Runaway train
Burning up the track
Moving under the starry light...
Can I be yours
...until sunlight?
Published 13th Jan 2014
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13th Jan 2014 8:48am
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13th Jan 2014 11:10pm
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14th Jan 2014 3:23am
Ohhh.....I love these lyrics. :) Would love to hear this put to music. Wonderful song!
Welcome to the Ink Jungle of DU! Xo
Welcome to the Ink Jungle of DU! Xo
14th Jan 2014 7:25am
Thank you so much! I was thinking piano with a bass tempo in the background...
Thank you for the welcome, so excited to be involved xo
Thank you for the welcome, so excited to be involved xo
14th Jan 2014 9:29am
Very beautiful lyrics, I have a music in my mind when I read your text. Wonderful! And welcome in DUP!
15th Jan 2014 00:18am
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, means a lot to me :)
14th Jan 2014 11:11pm
Creatively Crafted! Lovely Lyrics--to be certain!
Can 'feel' the almost desperate, runaway passion within your lines!
I must say, that I agree with your choice of musical arrangement....definitely a piano piece!
A very warm welcome, to the DUP! May you enjoy your stay!
Can 'feel' the almost desperate, runaway passion within your lines!
I must say, that I agree with your choice of musical arrangement....definitely a piano piece!
A very warm welcome, to the DUP! May you enjoy your stay!
15th Jan 2014 00:20am
It is a desperation not to let the moment run away, to be swept up with. Unusual feeling.
Thank you for your warm welcome, definitely looking forward to being a contributing member x
Thank you for your warm welcome, definitely looking forward to being a contributing member x
15th Jan 2014 10:45am
runaway train, runaway emotions. there's a lot of excitement in your song. I can hear the clickety-clack gaining momentum...
16th Jan 2014 1:05am
16th Jan 2014 3:39am
Wow! That was exceptional!! Read like a song
In fact I had already heard the music kick in as I read thru
It! Impressive ink lady :)
In fact I had already heard the music kick in as I read thru
It! Impressive ink lady :)
16th Jan 2014 5:16am
16th Jan 2014 11:55am
"It is what it is". How often I say just that. To let go and give in to the need. Very much enjoying you ink my dear. A healthy additive to DU Ms Heart. Champion!
16th Jan 2014 12:27pm
16th Jan 2014 11:50pm
Runaway train
Burning up the track
Runaway train
Cannot stop, no going back
Moving under the starry light,
just you and me tonight
just you and me tonight...
an ultimate desire
of all humans
i am so happy to see
u have been read by so many
and what is more important
have earned so many comments
but tc of candle lips
Burning up the track
Runaway train
Cannot stop, no going back
Moving under the starry light,
just you and me tonight
just you and me tonight...
an ultimate desire
of all humans
i am so happy to see
u have been read by so many
and what is more important
have earned so many comments
but tc of candle lips
17th Jan 2014 00:02am
17th Jan 2014 3:35am
thanks just posted
an apple
funny one ur on line enjoy
with words play
and do say
an apple
funny one ur on line enjoy
with words play
and do say