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The Experience of Control
I am a dominatrix
with fire dousing words
I wrap them tightly around fleshy curves
I'm feeling a bit disturbed as
I stand firmly above you, Dear Sir
my commands are clearly heard and observed
......
I am a submissive
with nod coated pleas
finding comfort on my bluing knees
the roughshod air constricts while their
mastering the welting inflictions without cease
misery now reigns upon the plotted misdeeds
Aware these things are done on purpose
merely to taste the punishing words before us
Thank you is told during the experience of control.
Published 11th Jan 2014
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11th Jan 2014 10:32pm
Thank u for ur submissiveness whipping me with such forcefully words I love this
11th Jan 2014 10:34pm
12th Jan 2014 00:33am
is it ur normal stance
o woman
what will happen
to ur wet vagina
finding comfort on my bluing knees
the rear specialists
need it
o woman
what will happen
to ur wet vagina
finding comfort on my bluing knees
the rear specialists
need it
12th Jan 2014 4:36pm
12th Jan 2014 1:38am
Whipping commands from bruised knees
Force me from this reality
Love to structure of this poem. Love it
Force me from this reality
Love to structure of this poem. Love it
12th Jan 2014 4:38pm
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12th Jan 2014 2:08am
I like your lusty lexicon, Angel, & the switch between dom & sub, so many ways to play. very arousing...
12th Jan 2014 4:39pm
12th Jan 2014 12:54pm
The strength of your words, amazing! Keeps feeding you verse by verse. Love it! You may continue...
12th Jan 2014 4:35pm
12th Jan 2014 1:05pm
Mmmmmmm that pic. Is yummy!! lol
But hey your words 'taste' even better!
Loved the mastery of 'control' you exhibited with your ink
my sweet sexy one :)
But hey your words 'taste' even better!
Loved the mastery of 'control' you exhibited with your ink
my sweet sexy one :)
12th Jan 2014 4:36pm
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
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19th Jan 2014 4:30pm
Balance, variety, transcendent sexuality and sensuality. Beautiful words, thank you for sharing :)
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19th Jan 2014 9:03pm
You make pain sound so wonderful thin this piece...and control sound so nice...I enjoyed this...
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20th Jan 2014 4:37pm
HOT write Ms. Blue!!!
Keep that pen swinging sweets!!!
Loved it!!
Sir Lancelott
Keep that pen swinging sweets!!!
Loved it!!
Sir Lancelott
20th Jan 2014 4:51pm
20th Jan 2014 5:16pm
wow,you have a gift of putting out what you love so deep,i love your poems,blue angel
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 7:35pm
1st Mar 2014 4:52pm
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1st Mar 2014 7:10pm