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Lovepsalm
Her love is my shepherd
I shall not want
She bids me lie down in her arms
She soothes me to still peaceful sleep
She restores my soul
She leads me in the paths of compassion for loves sake
Even though I walk through the valley in the shadow of
my past I will fear no future
For she is with me
Her acceptance and her support they comfort me
She prepares defences in the presence of my fears
She fills my mind with her words
My emotion spills over
Surely her sweetness and understanding will
lead me all the days of my life and I will dwell
in the house of love forever.
And ever..
(A little rewrite of the 23rd Psalm. Pls forgive my use of the template. It just spoke volumes to me at it sits)
I shall not want
She bids me lie down in her arms
She soothes me to still peaceful sleep
She restores my soul
She leads me in the paths of compassion for loves sake
Even though I walk through the valley in the shadow of
my past I will fear no future
For she is with me
Her acceptance and her support they comfort me
She prepares defences in the presence of my fears
She fills my mind with her words
My emotion spills over
Surely her sweetness and understanding will
lead me all the days of my life and I will dwell
in the house of love forever.
And ever..
(A little rewrite of the 23rd Psalm. Pls forgive my use of the template. It just spoke volumes to me at it sits)
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
5th Jan 2014 7:36am
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Thank you so much for your words. They always mean a lot Ms Mia. Done enough thinking of that sort. Time to get off my ass and get back into it. Again your words mean loads Ms Mia. I thank you. xo
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5th Jan 2014 7:55am
The house of love forever and ever!You bet love!I feel you, don't ever forget it TS!Great poem love! XO
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5th Jan 2014 8:00am
Thank you babe. You know how much your opinion matters to me. Thanks Angel. xo
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- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
5th Jan 2014 10:30am
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5th Jan 2014 12:32pm
My respect of your work makes your words always valuable to me Sir. They mean much Mr F.
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5th Jan 2014 12:46pm
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5th Jan 2014 2:04pm
That's an awesome and emotional write, Twitch. I would say this is one of your most catchy poems, so heartfelt and touching. Thanks for sharing and touching my soul so profoundly. xo
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5th Jan 2014 2:17pm
Awesome compliment Ms Chi. I thank you from my heart. Your words always touch me. You mean much. Know this. xo
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5th Jan 2014 11:38pm
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2014 7:18pm
Oh gosh! This is beautiful,Sway! I love the reference/depiction of Psalm 23.
So cleverly crafted in it's entirety. Fantastic read...Xo
So cleverly crafted in it's entirety. Fantastic read...Xo
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5th Jan 2014 11:42pm
Thank you Lady Rain. As I was saying to Mr H. It had I nice comfy feeling about it. I enjoyed writing this one. Thanks as usual for your kind works Ms Rain. Happy days! xo
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- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
5th Jan 2014 7:56pm
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5th Jan 2014 11:43pm
Most definitely Ms Petit. Is a well felt feeling. Always a fan Ms Petit. Thank you M'lady.
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- Edited 15th May 2018 9:41pm
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6th Jan 2014 8:22am
And you Brother. Thanks for that sunshine. And big compliment. Heavy duty my friend. I appreciate large.
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