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~BLEEDING THE PAIN OUT~
Emotions
twisted and tangled
your heart hanging by a nail
what are you to do now
Anger bubbles to the top
and you just can't stop
you slide the razor across quickly
and smile sickly
as you are soon drained
of all emotions that previously came
twisted and tangled
your heart hanging by a nail
what are you to do now
Anger bubbles to the top
and you just can't stop
you slide the razor across quickly
and smile sickly
as you are soon drained
of all emotions that previously came
Published 11th Feb 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
11th Feb 2011 6:26pm
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11th Feb 2011 6:38pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
11th Feb 2011 6:45pm
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11th Feb 2011 8:27pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
11th Feb 2011 8:33pm
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11th Feb 2011 8:38pm
15th Feb 2011 6:04am
15th Feb 2011 3:40pm
goods i like it when people can relate to what im feeling and thinking :) thank you dalton
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 5:37pm
16th Feb 2011 2:57am
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16th Feb 2011 3:01am
11th Mar 2011 11:39pm
wow this is an awesome poem i can related to :)
and i really like the last 2 lines!
fantastic job!
and i really like the last 2 lines!
fantastic job!
12th Mar 2011 7:30pm