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Heartless, Am I?
No,
Does my tears,
have value waste,
as my shape
worsen at the ring
of your name.
Fate,
that never ceases,
wonders,
as I slaughter the
lies
that found it's way
out of your mouth,
but yet,
heartless, am I?
If after
it's over,
I feel satisfied,
magnified by
the moon, the glow.
the blood, the gore,
the scene bestowed,
and I smile.
Heartless, am I?
If I taste,
inhale,
the smell,
which sails,
in the nightly
atmosphere.
Your spiritual essence,
absent,
your presence,
by the makings of my
tied, hands,
but 'heartless' am I?
For empty
was not,
the shell of my heart.
The emotion that
swell inside
for you.
My love had failed,
I went stark insane,
with the love that
I held,
and let it all pour out.
I hold you now,
in my arm tonight,
forever you are mine.
But yet you say,
Heartless am I?
NO,
Heartless, I am Not!
Does my tears,
have value waste,
as my shape
worsen at the ring
of your name.
Fate,
that never ceases,
wonders,
as I slaughter the
lies
that found it's way
out of your mouth,
but yet,
heartless, am I?
If after
it's over,
I feel satisfied,
magnified by
the moon, the glow.
the blood, the gore,
the scene bestowed,
and I smile.
Heartless, am I?
If I taste,
inhale,
the smell,
which sails,
in the nightly
atmosphere.
Your spiritual essence,
absent,
your presence,
by the makings of my
tied, hands,
but 'heartless' am I?
For empty
was not,
the shell of my heart.
The emotion that
swell inside
for you.
My love had failed,
I went stark insane,
with the love that
I held,
and let it all pour out.
I hold you now,
in my arm tonight,
forever you are mine.
But yet you say,
Heartless am I?
NO,
Heartless, I am Not!
Published 3rd Jan 2014
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4th Jan 2014 3:30am
Thank You Dart...
That Obsessiveness that doesn't seem all that obsessive until you really read within the lines.
^_^
That Obsessiveness that doesn't seem all that obsessive until you really read within the lines.
^_^
5th Jan 2014 6:22pm
the challenge of the question reminds me of Shakespeare however the images presented read more like Poe.
6th Jan 2014 3:28am
wow... Having my write compared to two great poets'... one of which I'm a huge fan of, is the greatest honor!
Thank you JM
Thank you JM
7th Jan 2014 6:54am
Hello friend, Man Alive friend, Yes, it Does take a lot of heart, to play the game all the way onto the end, and keep ones love with them, forever, and ever, and ever,hehehe... Loved this one, reread this one a few times at least, to get it all in, like a good meal, it satisfied my mind, well done friend.... I got this one, even if only from my kinda twisted view point, hehehe... o.0
7th Jan 2014 7:36pm
I intended it for it to be a love story... but it ended up turning into something twisted.
like the mind of a psycho
like the mind of a psycho
7th Jan 2014 11:34am
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