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Do I glow from within
giving off a bright aura
even if I'm not good?
Am I capable of shining
in the sky with the
twinkling white stars?
Can my name be beautiful
on your tongue when
you say it outloud?
Would you think I'm beautiful
when I am speaking in
pure honesty?
If you heard my laughter
would you love it and
laugh with me?
When I walk into a room
I act like I own it would you
be proud?
If I attacked you would
you think I was sexy
and let me?
Could you see me as
a poem and read my
every love letter?
When I say I love you
will your heart grow
with your smile?
giving off a bright aura
even if I'm not good?
Am I capable of shining
in the sky with the
twinkling white stars?
Can my name be beautiful
on your tongue when
you say it outloud?
Would you think I'm beautiful
when I am speaking in
pure honesty?
If you heard my laughter
would you love it and
laugh with me?
When I walk into a room
I act like I own it would you
be proud?
If I attacked you would
you think I was sexy
and let me?
Could you see me as
a poem and read my
every love letter?
When I say I love you
will your heart grow
with your smile?
Published 2nd Jan 2014
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2nd Jan 2014 10:26am
Wonderfully, probing questions. I think one of the more important one is:
"Would you think I'm beautiful
when I am speaking in
pure honesty?"
That is a true test of respect and the unconditionality of love. Well done Tommie!
"Would you think I'm beautiful
when I am speaking in
pure honesty?"
That is a true test of respect and the unconditionality of love. Well done Tommie!
2nd Jan 2014 6:34pm
So glad you see that GW.I'm an honest person in reality and most people don't like that.I on the other hand love it.Why be any other way, it just creates problems!As always thank you for reading me and your feed back.
2nd Jan 2014 7:05pm
I too enjoy more the company of truly honest people. Although, at times, the truth hurts and I cannot, lamentably, be categorized as a truly honest person. I'm working on that.
2nd Jan 2014 7:14pm
2nd Jan 2014 8:08pm
Thank you Tommie...if I could just manage to be more truthful with myself :) There's the rub...
2nd Jan 2014 8:11pm
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2nd Jan 2014 6:39pm
2nd Jan 2014 5:44pm
this poetry is very personal
addressed to some one
let him alone answer your question
good poetic consumation
addressed to some one
let him alone answer your question
good poetic consumation
2nd Jan 2014 6:41pm
All of my writes are personal A.
Some more than others.But you're
right, this one is very personal.
Thank you for recognizing.
Some more than others.But you're
right, this one is very personal.
Thank you for recognizing.
2nd Jan 2014 7:01pm
Give some credit
to this sexy mind,
it has explored
many a sexy kind
all out in the doldrums of time,
trying to find love
in garbage bin
we all call time
sex alone is in each mind
how one does grind,
it's the desire of individual mankind
be ground or grind
but have one thing in mind
poetry is emotion
love in motion
you may call it lust
ere you burst
at any thrust
3rd Jan 2014 7:24am
3rd Jan 2014 11:06am
4th Jan 2014 2:49pm
Yes.
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Yes. And yes. Every damn bit Lady. Every damn bit. Questions with answers Angel. All of them yes. Deep babe. As questions like this should be. Thank you doll. XO
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes. And yes. Every damn bit Lady. Every damn bit. Questions with answers Angel. All of them yes. Deep babe. As questions like this should be. Thank you doll. XO
